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Tincho's picture

I had to read the tip. If you have to read it to get it... its not working.

Tincho
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Have Heart's picture

Agree.

Have Heart
Activity Score 922
Art Director
Wordnerd's picture

i disagree. for me this works nicely (but the art is still very bad)! but the other two are just horrible :P

Wordnerd
Activity Score 6620
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sold's picture

this tell me more to slow down WITH THE CAR to save planet... since we see at the 60 speed the planet is ok.
poor art work also.

sold
Activity Score 3373
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jimkuz's picture

I think the art and design of all 3 is excellent.

I did need to read the copy under the ads to understand what the message was.

jimkuz
Activity Score 404
Graphic Designer at Freelance
Its only words...'s picture

I agree...the message is nt getin thru....luks lik the ad is aimed at slowin down the car's speed...

Its only words...
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Rog's picture

Not quite there.

Rog
Activity Score 6068
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>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

jimkuz's picture

I think all 3 are excellent for bike ads. I think the execution/design/art is excellent.
I just think they need some copy to clarify the message.

jimkuz
Activity Score 404
Graphic Designer at Freelance
pulchinela's picture

original and fun

pulchinela
Activity Score 1163
Gunjan69's picture

I think the product should have been sold on a health platform rather than an environmental platform...they could have shown a guy getting fatter on the speedometer....rather than the sheikh or earth..

Gunjan69
Activity Score 65
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Killer Kowalski's picture

It looks like student work...

Killer Kowalski
Activity Score 394
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NomadDCLXVI's picture

miss of logic. if faster you drive faster earth is gonna flood sooner? :) ok.
it§s not about choosing the bike instead. but anyway, nice try.

NomadDCLXVI
Activity Score 437
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Ombudsman's picture

junk.

Ombudsman
Activity Score 34
will30x's picture

forzado, el velocímetro berredísimo, y ponle lo que sea arriba.

will30x
Activity Score 18
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