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thirty6chambers's picture

the copy sounds like it was written in a high school english class...

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gmint7's picture

:::J:::

brilliant tagline tho..

gmint7
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:::J:::

Its only words...'s picture

I agree..the tagline sounds neat

Its only words...
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panasit's picture

I like the tag line also.

panasit
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cajebo's picture

I think this is an admirable ad.

I'll take a bit of exception to the "...sounds like it was written in a high school english (sp) class..."

Methinks the author(s) were directing 'language' to the audience for which this ad may have been intended.

Given its size, I'm thinking metro-newspaper somewhere. The straightforward, simplistic, and not-cute message was aptly done.

The tag is nice as well, although, if indeed placed/printed in newspaper, I'm wondering if it was legible.

I'd like to know what sort of spike in donations were shown after this ad's run had concluded.

Warm regards from Dayton, Ohio

Michael

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