Kiss it
Description
Track is the bowling ball for the geeks and tech heads of bowling. They love the science of the game and drool over the results Track balls produce.
Print advertisement created by Bohan, United States for Track Bowling, within the category: Gaming.
Creative Director: Gregg Boling
Art Director: Jim Valosik
Copywriter: Jason Corbin
Illustrator: Rainey Kirk
Art direction is nice. Needs a headline that isn't so obvious and expected.
There is a lot going on in the ad. Maybe cut back on copy and let the art direction tell the story.
-Natalie
http://www.nataliemarion.com
BMW
-- 9 out of 10 dentists agree that most people will believe any statistic you throw at them.
Are you all kidding me. This is just plain bad. The art direction looks like bad catalogue work from the 70s. The writing is uninspiring. The headline is unoriginal.
How did this even get posted up here?
as mentioned beneath the ad, it's directed to bowling pros... I guess this ad's message will be picked up well by the target group. Job done!
Dear Sir,
We are pleased to inform you that we are an established Manufacturers and Exporters of high quality (Bowling gloves shoe cover Polo Shirts T-Shirts bags and bowling Accessories) Bowling Products in Pakistan.
We are in this feel since 1995. We want to built business relation with your company in a atmospare of goodwill and friendship.
Your interest as to the samples, quotations is highly desirable you can send your inquiry's with a confidence.
If you wants more information of our products please contact us freely.
Thanks and best regards,
Muhammad Jamil.
Flywell
1065-Khadim Ali Road
Sialkot-Pakistan.
Tel # 0092 52 4265145
Fax # 0092 52 4262015
E-mail :- info@flywellbowling.com
Website:- www.flywellbowling.com
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