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LAZ's picture

oh, common!

LAZ
Activity Score 288
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axelk's picture

besides the idea that's a bit crap, the art direction is not very good either. sorry

axelk
Activity Score 286
chinaski's picture

bad photo.

chinaski
Activity Score 951
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Vetinari's picture

copy sucks too.

Vetinari
Activity Score 110
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puppiepoppy's picture

Hmmnn, this is kinda lame for a student work.

puppiepoppy
Activity Score 1634
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twelve_noon's picture

we' re not talking about the breakthrough idea and the line needs more workbut i find it neat and nice overall. The turks are really trying...

twelve_noon
Activity Score 617
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itch's picture

yeah.. same here. i find this very simple and neat. nice and engaging colours to attract attention.
BUT, the visual needs a lot of improvement for better art direction!

itch
Activity Score 806
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Justice-Man's picture

No veo nada bueno aqui.

Justice-Man
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addyhoch10's picture

1776?
(bakteri)?

addyhoch10
Activity Score 2592
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Blahg's picture

Escherichia Coli is a classification of bacteria transmitted through undercooked meat, particularly beef, 1776 is actually a strain of the bacteria, so a biologist might note that Escherichia Coli 1776 is present, to the best of my recollection it has absolutely nothing to do with the year 1776 (since undercooked beef existed before 1776), and more to do with the common strain of this bacteria having been the 1,776 identified.

My guess would be that the researcher was poor and they just assumed the 1776 referred to the year it was "discovered" OR he was just desperate to make this whole gravestone idea work and figured nobody would know the difference.

Blahg
Activity Score 616
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addyhoch10's picture

haha awesome, thanks. didn't know the 1776 detail. or are you just winding me up? :D

actually, at first i was about to write that probably most people know the term COLI so they ruin the joke with the additional explanation "bakteri" in brackets.
but then i realised there are a couple of other things about this ad that are possibly bothering me even more.
so i tried to keep it short.

now my attempt failed.

addyhoch10
Activity Score 2592
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Blahg's picture

Yeah you're right there's lots wrong with this ad like how did a bacteria that comes from raw beef end up in your bathroom?

Blahg
Activity Score 616
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addyhoch10's picture

Escherichia coli (IPA: [ˌɛ.ʃəˈɹɪ.kjə ˈkʰoʊ.laɪ]) (E. coli), is one of the main species of bacteria living in the lower intestines of mammals, known as gut flora.

addyhoch10
Activity Score 2592
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mrtalented's picture

simple idea. bad photography, copy and art direction.

mrtalented
Activity Score 2171
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foster.ideas's picture

I did this idea before. Only better. ;-)

foster.ideas
Activity Score 10
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hang-the-dj's picture

Then you still need to try harder...

hang-the-dj
Activity Score 1262
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hadrianapolis's picture

Copy at the bottom not means "Millions of germs will die!", it's meaning "Cleans, provides %100 hygiene". Unfortunately this work had Kristal Elma award; the most prestigious advertising award competition in Turkey. Amazing ha?

hadrianapolis
Activity Score 733
turkish's picture

So, how many did YOU get of this prestigious award, then? Didn't you add them on your CV the day after the awards show? At an interview for a job, don't you let them employers know about your local awards to bargain for 100 euros more?

Be honest. Be a man.

turkish
Andal's picture

No.

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Rog's picture

Aiiiyyyeeeeee!

Rog
Activity Score 6080
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>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

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