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novel's picture

nice one!

Activity Score 190
Copywriter |

::son of mount malang::
::hidup adalah proses menuju kematian yang sempurna::

klaussnow's picture

they should integrate a line 'play and protect at the same time'

Activity Score 1645
Art Director |

... its already been done...

roman-schwienbacher.com's picture

it is a good point.
almost a match point...

Activity Score 1021
Jet Propulsion Lab's picture

Why repeat what the visual is already telling you?
Here the picure is doing most of the heavy lifting in communicating the message. The line should be quiet, almost invisible. There's NO NEED to force-feed the concept to the audience...

Jet Propulsion Lab
Activity Score 10679
Carlos Duty's picture

una cosa es exagerar o ser ridículo y otra es ser incoherente dentro del mundo que planteamos.
ya. tiene el paraguas. la pelota cae y?.... a la mierda.


Carlos Duty
Activity Score 96
ccsman04's picture

I really like this. The visual is right on and I think the copy actually helps in making the connection. Maybe they could have just said "Protect yourself." Short, almost 'invisible'.

Activity Score 165
Punch's picture

Y si el paraguas es azul?. No sé, a lo mejor eso contribuye al branding (sorry, es sarcasmo).

Lo cierto es que el concepto es bueno. La dirección de arte me parece buenísima. Pero el recurso del paraguas crea un ruido al momento de entrar en contexto con su funcionalidad.

"Aquí también se opina en español y em português".

Activity Score 612
Creative Director |

"no silencies lo que no sabes expresar".

Rog's picture

Yes. Simple, engaging and insightful. Good job.

Activity Score 6080
Copywriter |

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

DarkSide's picture

I like this.
The retouching is better than the golf one

Activity Score 1064
me thinks's picture

Everything fine. Cheers.

me thinks
Activity Score 722
Joe76's picture

Where´s the third arm with the racket?

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Art Director
LucasPS's picture

There is no concept, no sence. Protecting of the sun its ruining sport.

English clases!!

Activity Score 523
Copywriter at Bureau Creativo |

Todos somos ignorantes, pero no todos ignoramos lo mismo.

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