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Bruno's picture

Nice art diretion in all pieces.

Bruno
Activity Score 18
Art Director
Spanky's picture

the lines are a little flat. looks nice. but this look has been done before.

Spanky
Activity Score 4899
Other
itch's picture

nice graphics. But repeated ones in each two ads? perhaps they could explore more..

itch
Activity Score 806
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Have Heart's picture

Nice art, but the lines are not exactly great.

Have Heart
Activity Score 922
Art Director
Have Heart's picture

Nice art, but the lines are not exactly great.

Have Heart
Activity Score 922
Art Director
teenie's picture

The lines are definitely flat. The idea's in there, but it's not shining through. Rewrite and rewrite until it's tight!

Personally, white bread at a BBQ is a sure sign of a bad BBQ, but that's just me...

teenie
Activity Score 1894
Copywriter
miko1aj's picture

The art is awesome, but i've seen billions of ads like this. This actually doesn't mean that i cannot admire typography :)

miko1aj
Activity Score 3086
addyhoch10's picture

including the logo font, they used 7 (!) different fonts in this ad. why?
the look is ok but this font mess spoils it for me.

addyhoch10
Activity Score 2592
Art Director
Jet Propulsion Lab's picture

That's his "thing". Over art direction.
The burning/tearing of edges. Layer upon layer of effects. Mixed fonts. Doesn't matter who the client is. That's his THING. He's a rather fresh talent in the business. But he's been "honing" his art direction since he was in college in Texas. Basically a "one-trick" pony. But he IS very good at what he does. And sometimes it works. Other times it fails. But he's still too young to know the difference. He's just having too much fun "doing ads"... And I say good for him.

Jet Propulsion Lab
Activity Score 10679
Copywriter
sloppy4's picture

this line is an old joke. bad mullen. the others are better. i like the handwich line.

sloppy4
Activity Score 1492
Vicky's picture

is it just me, or theres too much retro-art direction nowadays?

Vicky
Activity Score 375
Creative Director
copycomoelcopi's picture

bad copy, baaaaaad copy…

copycomoelcopi
Activity Score 822
Copywriter
x-men's picture

again silver´s work is better than Jims.

x-men
Activity Score 340
Creative Director
gibshellenberger's picture

this ad looks just like every other cliched southern piece. welcome to texas, yeehaw. dunk the ad in gasoline, light it on fire, stomp it out with muddy boots, then spit on it.

well lookie here y'all, we've got a texas ad!

gibshellenberger
Activity Score 157
Creative Director
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