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besoz's picture

love it but a pit old

besoz
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tantrik_indian's picture

What is the product?
~~be cool eh!~~

tantrik_indian
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~~this paranoid survived!~~

ivan's picture

Bank, credit card

ivan
Activity Score 12
Creative Director at Ads of the World
postman's picture

It took me too long to read these (mostly the first one, of course). I think, most people won't care.

postman
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Jet Propulsion Lab's picture

A sale.
Please get it right if you're going to even ATTEMPT to reach an English speaking audience.

Jet Propulsion Lab
Activity Score 10679
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Pacific Blue's picture

Anyone know the name of this is typo?
Thanx

Pacific Blue
Activity Score 335
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/// The clock is laughing in my face ///

fractalrene's picture

Not bad... I think some art work may improve it, like the emboss on a credit card close up... or actually make them and send'em as direct mail to potential clients.

fractalrene
Activity Score 1504
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Qbird's picture

mmm....
personally.. i don't like it, credit card got 16 DIGITS but no alphabet.. why needa put in alphabet???
just to make up the idea???

chirp chirp chirp...

Qbird
Activity Score 142
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ad is an art...
art aint ad!!
chirp chirp chirp...

mayhem's picture

IMHO, I think it works better with the target audiences. They would be familiar with the brand/logo. No explanation needed. Although the headline is a bit difficult to read. However, it's a bit confusing for those who don't know the brand/logo. But who cares as long as it works for the target audiences:)

mayhem
Activity Score 126
Art Director
laylowmoe's picture

I disagree. Ads are mass communication - as in, MASS. Which brand doesn't want to, or can afford to survive without, expanding their market? This doesn't mean watering down their message - but it does mean that, let's say, you're selling to edgy, rebellious teens, a 30-something should see your ad and think "wow, sure looks cool to be an edgy rebellious teen of today, hmm, maybe I can relive it by buying this product".

laylowmoe
Activity Score 328
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me thinks's picture

i didn't cared to read...

me thinks
Activity Score 722
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SlimRich's picture

nonsense...

SlimRich
Activity Score 81
Art Director at Art Manager at Dmessage SL
Boxey's picture

too hard to read.

Boxey
Activity Score 8879
Melaleuca In-House
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