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addyhoch10's picture

too vague and long-winded.

addyhoch10
Activity Score 2592
Art Director
jamesrothenburg's picture

I like the reversal device in these ads. Nice idea. The art direction doesn't help further that idea though. Why the children's style illustration? Is that to show the naivety of the idea? If so, then why the distressed type? (which is very 90's and dated BTW) Too many different directions going on in the art direction. Simplify the art direction and the idea will be much stronger.

jamesrothenburg
Activity Score 554
Art Director
Your Nightmare's picture

This is really bad idea, with this client you can find other concepts and execution much better, what is this? who is the person that choose this pieces, please i want to see good ads.

Your Nightmare
griffin7's picture

To recognise the good ads we need to see bad ads. That's the whole point of such a forum.

griffin7
Activity Score 76
Copywriter
jamesrothenburg's picture

I agree. I'm pretty sure this is student work, why don't your try discussing what works and what doesn't in the ads? Instead of just saying this good or this is shit.

jamesrothenburg
Activity Score 554
Art Director
whitespace's picture

that's not a single ad that everyone loves.

whitespace
Activity Score 1953
Creative Director
lava's picture

the concept is nice... could've been better

lava
Maxwedge's picture

Say whaa?

Maxwedge
Activity Score 558
Art Director |

== Bring back fags, lard and the biff.

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