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rcantalice's picture

shouldn't the women be doing a naughty face or at least smilling?

rcantalice
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kergu's picture

its not necessary.jajajajaja.. nice visual idea

kergu
Activity Score 6795
jazarah's picture

hahahaha I like, but the girl don't seem to enjoy it!

jazarah
Activity Score 1262
muxa's picture

Wanna make this work better?

Put a texturized background or some furniture and use the shaking effect only in the girl.

This girl should also be doing a naughty face or at least smiling a lot.

The way it is now makes me see the photographer shaking, not the girl. So the execution is killing the idea.

muxa
Activity Score 602
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brain123's picture

When I first saw it I thought the dildo featured a built-in camera...
With the changes you suggest, it would make total sense.

brain123
Activity Score 830
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sold's picture

now we talking! good solutions.

sold
Activity Score 3379
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doworkson's picture

agreed. and i maybe wouldnt show the product, just the copy "Yoba. Erotic Toys."

doworkson
Activity Score 242
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capywriter's picture

good thought muxa... nice idea anyway

capywriter
Activity Score 5512
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graphikamaal's picture

Great observation muxa about the photographer shaking instead of the model.

graphikamaal
Activity Score 111
sonucoues2002's picture

confusing the cunsumer
wht they try to promot
i mean if sum1 change the brand logo like put cannon logo place of yoba and write "cannon -now available with vibration mode" thn it makes sence to me.but wht they did in the ad is confusing the cunsumer

execution killing the idea and the brand but i like the girl smile,looks like a mordern monalisa to me

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sonucoues2002
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Geko's picture

nice, after all.

Geko
Activity Score 161
Art Director
chinaski's picture

very nice and simple!

chinaski
Activity Score 951
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teenie's picture

Shaky image and a naughty toy--it's pretty obvious to me. The campaign could use a little diversity instead of 3 of the same, but I like it.

teenie
Activity Score 1894
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everartz's picture

yea yea..
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fractalrene's picture

The idea is good, the art direction should be re-thought. I would think about what muxa wrote.

fractalrene
Activity Score 1504
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