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December 2009
Olympia Tech:  Good job

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Print advertisement created by Bd'm, United States for Olympia Tech, within the category: Industrial, Agriculture.

Advertising Agency: Bd'm Minneapolis, USA
Art Director: James Zucco
Photographer: Justin Carrasquillo
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germanhudders's picture

Great copy, but other than that the image and the creative aren't the best

germanhudders
Activity Score 336
Copywriter at Droga5
tirthomitro's picture

old copy... rather, old way of writing copy.

tirthomitro
Activity Score 2758
Creative Director at Grey Global, India |

they showed me a picture & i laughed
dignity has never been photographed

jackmancer2017's picture

Exactly my though. Somehow I feel like " hey, I've red this before... "

jackmancer2017
CurryJ's picture

I like the confident, strong tone of voice being communicated in the writing...it's got attitude or rather 'ad'titude. As far as the look of the ad goes I think it nicely balances out the copy.

CurryJ
Activity Score 949
Copywriter |

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I think; therefore I am

satrianee's picture

It's not a copy, it's a business fact. And the visual is real too. Considering the sector it is addressing, I believe this does it's job very well.

satrianee
Activity Score 3748
silvi's picture

Seems student work

silvi
Activity Score 4170
Copywriter
flavourfish's picture

Agree with satrianee. Anyway (at least in my country) this buisness almost never advertise, so using "old copy" or "new trendy useless copy" wouldnt change the fact that the "old copy" is the best.
Art Direction though could be a bit better, the photo vs the bakground and copy is not connected enough I think. And I dont get the "delicious font" usage..

flavourfish
Activity Score 125
Byavisen Bergen
JustinCarrasquillo's picture

It was -30 F that day...

JustinCarrasquillo
Activity Score 563
Photographer at Los Angeles, CA |

http://www.justincarrasquillo.com

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