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kurtberengeiger's picture

Nice illustrations, but it's all too clear why no copywriter is listed in the credits.

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MicheleVirgilio's picture

nice work. not so clear but i think works

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Wordfruit's picture

I guess the pure fact that it's a comic and so different graphically to other supplements etc will mean people will notice it.

But I'd also guess it'll restrict readership -- lots of people simply don't read comics.

I read the first bit and the copy seemed to be comic-style. I think what would have got my attention would be if the copy was not comic-style.

I guess the rest depends on how good the story in the comic is. I didn't read it, so I don't know.

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Bob08's picture

Never seen so many (small) words in a comic.
I lost the desire to read at the second box.

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vote4pedro's picture

Mini misses Crispin. The old Crispin, anyway.

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mois's picture

the direction art is good but all is boring also.

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mrcreativerebel's picture

the illustrations are awesome!

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kleenex's picture

nice look for the illustrations.

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bate_palmas's picture

Looks good but waaay too much copy going on here. Got bored after a few seconds

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Nomad8's picture

The art is interesting and got my attention but you guys seriously need to read some comics. The content is like a brochure. And surely a plot? Even if this is vol1. or a teaser, even if you don't care about a story, use the time tested comic strategy - "A threat - a hero - a hero in trouble - rise of companions (not compagnons, for god's sake!) - how will it turn out?!!! - wait for the next issue!" Isn't there a writer in the house?

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TheWasteBin's picture

Nice art, but nobody's going to stick with this long enough to read it. Got bored after box 2. The copy wasn't engaging. Not too fond of the idea either. Superhero car? Could have done better.

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