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October 2010

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Print advertisement created by FP7, United Arab Emirates for McDonald's, within the category: Food.

Advertising Agency: FP7 McCann, Dubai, UAE
Creative Director: Georges El Hoyek
Art Directors: Cesar Bautista, Paola Mounla, Javaid Siddiqui
Copywriter: Kamlesh Shankar
Account Directors: Firos Malaydan, Mazen Sous
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Pedestrian's picture

I get the concept, but that's a hell of a lot of reading.

Pedestrian
Activity Score 492
morse's picture

I agree. Lot of reading, but it's clear even if you don't read all of it. 100% Pure Beef. Hired.

morse
Activity Score 18087
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silvi's picture

I don´t like it. Too heavy copy. Not to creative.

silvi
Activity Score 4172
Copywriter
HappyHour's picture

seems first thought. a pretty weak one at that.

HappyHour
Activity Score 2381
Guest's picture

Good concept as a way to illustrate selectively choosing beef, but unfortunately the copy is as dry as the patties themselves. And there was a real opportunity to be humorous and quirky - heck, even just FUN (especially considering the brand).

The other problem with the copy is that it alludes to things that are unappealing e.g. grilling on two hotplates (versus an actual grill), and slaughtering of beef (we know where it comes from but it's still a food ad and needs to maintain its appeal).

Guest
jackmancer2017's picture

Don't have to read it fully to make it work. It's pretty clear. It works, but not hugely creative.

jackmancer2017
Sushi lover's picture

when I first see this ad, I kinda get the idea. but just the long long long reading, I gave up to dig more about the idea.
the long reading kinda scary me out.

Sushi lover
Activity Score 907

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Dzsoi's picture

Make the copy shorter or more funny/interesting. Idea is there absolutely.

Dzsoi
Activity Score 8557
Copywriter at Brightly
pez's picture

This is really ugly... Not deserves to be here at aotw for me...

pez
Activity Score 1804
Creative Director
Bitty86's picture

I suppose this isnt called the best ads of the world or even good ads of the world. Just ads of the world... this is an ad that is all

Bitty86
Activity Score 71
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