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stateoftheart's picture

Love the line.

stateoftheart
Activity Score 181
Copywriter
fauxjebus's picture

I like the concept, copy, design and art direction in this series. The only thing I don't like are the shoes. Eck!
Totally not my style, but I'm pretty sure I'm not the target.

fauxjebus
Activity Score 500
Art Director at WAX
Minimum's picture

The whole ad is falling apart. parts everywhere. A graphic that seems to be a .gif extracted very bad in a corner, a coloured logo in a black/white ad somewhere out of line/centre, shoes that do not fit on that place, a bit of copy on a place it shouldn't be. Overall, every item on this advertisment is on the wrong place. Its a bloody mess
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...and let the poets cry themselves to sleep. And all their tearfull words would turn back into steam

Minimum
Activity Score 1430
Graphic Designer |

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...and let the poets cry themselves to sleep. And all their tearfull words would turn back into steam

lsadunb's picture

Hehe... Good copy.

lsadunb
Activity Score 571
Copywriter
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