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brainslashed's picture

Can you say done to death?

brainslashed
Activity Score 32
Copywriter at Wunderman
Adaddicted's picture

"DONE TO DEATH"

Adaddicted
Activity Score 3435
Art Director |

withalltherespects

jorj's picture

yes we can, check my work.

jorj
Activity Score 638
Art Director at Senior Art Director
Molecule's picture

BOoooooOOOring.

Molecule
Activity Score 435
Copywriter
DanielDDB's picture

seriously booring

DanielDDB
Activity Score 53
Art Director at Bates Cosse Lagos, Nigeria
alexander_bickov's picture

I agree

alexander_bickov
Activity Score 3279
ivan's picture

I hear you guys. Will not post such anymore.

ivan
Creative Director at Ads of the World
J Designer's picture

I don’t think it’s that bad. But as someone else has previously said that perhaps a student section would be good for ads like these so people are more understanding?

J Designer
Activity Score 2420
Graphic Designer at Click Clack
dellsheng's picture

i made this work,and i agree this is boring.
what i want to show is my Finishing-art ability
I am just a student who is seeking a oppotunity of being a intern at shanghai's 4A advertising agency.
thank for u guy's comments.

dellsheng
Activity Score 21
Graphic Designer at shanghai |

http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMTU0OTQzNDMy.html

Phil Lestino's picture

Good for you...I am sure you will get a job...you are brave publishying your work....the most common thing these guys saym is done...but then hasn't everything? Good luck.

Phil Lestino
Activity Score 1684
Dzsoi's picture

(addressing to dellsheng) I think many creative directors want 2 things from you: good skills as an art director and fresh, good ideas. With this, you are able to show only PS/Indesign/whateverprogram skills. Don't spare the time to come up with a decent, new concept.

Dzsoi
Activity Score 8557
Copywriter at Brightly
Adaddicted's picture

... hey, if you had mentioned that you are a student you could certainly have avoided the missiles and arrows here!

Adaddicted
Activity Score 3435
Art Director |

withalltherespects

joelapompe's picture

I don't believe my eyes!

joelapompe
Activity Score 3863
Emanresu's picture

I do not read Chinese so I do not know the product and its benefits. I agree with Ivan on the five stars, the concept is very safe and has been done countless times; the foam of a drink giving the form of something to describe the beverage or the liquid itself shaped as a person or thing.

Don't be shy to post a link to your portfolio (if you have one) or the comments you receive on your work after having it reviewed. Best of luck with gaining that internship experience.

Emanresu
Activity Score 2148
Graphic Designer at Apparel design.
lynz's picture

I completely agree with you. I think that the best way to grow is to share your work, and unfortunately people here have just trashed the work and not many have given the reasons why they think it doesn't work. At least you stated as to WHY it doesn't work. Everyone has to start somewhere and I give kudos to him for putting it out there so early on in his career. People just tend to forget what it was like in their first years and just starting out.

I do think that a student section is a great idea, good way to see new talent and for the talent to learn and grow. Good luck to you.

lynz
Activity Score 104
Art Director
royschellekens's picture

Milk should be fresh, not recycled!

royschellekens
Activity Score 390
Art Director at Art Director |

http://twitter.com/royschellekens

Hate advertising? Make better ads.

Marlus Lau's picture

Dude...if are student, it's ok but, you should practice on this photoshop a little more. It's very unrealistic.

But I believe you can get there!

Marlus Lau
Activity Score 1808
Art Director at Editora O Estado do Paraná / Pós-graduação na Unicuritiba
CharlieBARSTOW's picture

way to drop the ball Ivan lol

CharlieBARSTOW
Activity Score 31
Art Director at Columbia College Chicago
isupsonic's picture

我只能说....打开这个页面..我被吓到了...还是国人做的,太丢脸了!!!!!!

isupsonic
Activity Score 2
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