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how do u spell sukks?

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"painfull"?

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patUDAY's picture

All 3 ads are bad. Forceful.

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picktokyo's picture

well said

picktokyo
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Copywriter at JWT
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Head & Shoulders would never have the word midget in an ad.

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Horrible!

I thought at first maybe a writer had art directed their own work, but there's an AD credited.... Learn to draw, or think about career change!

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so, you think an AD should be able to draw?

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So you think an AD should be able to draw, right?

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federo's picture

COME ON GUYS

federo
Activity Score 781
advertising agency
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Call me crazy, but I'm pretty sure its supposed to be cheap and cartoony looking. Its not supposed to be some artistic masterpiece. Its a comic... and one that made me laugh. I don't think its so bad.

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jeann's picture

nope, nope, nope, nope, nope.
it's not working for me.

jeann
Activity Score 107
LASALLE College of the Arts
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ooh god, please!

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Istiko's picture

oh god! horrible..
how they come up with this idea

Istiko
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Creative Director at Student Collage |

save my soul

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i think they came up with this idea when they were having fun thinking of ads, instead of leaving comments which would make them look like old, frustrated, sad and bored advertisers. it's very hard to suggest how to improve something i guess. much easier to destroy.

well, although this campaign is not exactly my masturbation material, i think the stories are quite stupid and fun and they should save it for maybe using it later in their careers.
(because now they are just students)

maybe they can transform it into some bizarre short comedy films shot in the 60s style. if they came up with these stories as they are, i'm sure they can come up with more, weirder and weirder.

i don't think they work that good in print as they are now, as they are a bit hard to follow. maybe they would work better if the stories were shorter, simpler and funnier. yes, even more absurd.

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