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May 2008
Fun Factory Erotic Toys:  War

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Print advertisement created by Firstell, China for Fun Factory Erotic Toys, within the category: House, Garden.

Caption

You will be afraid someone might hear you.

Advertising Agency: Firstell Communications, Shanghai, China
Creative Director: Murphy Chou
Art Directors: Murphy Chou
Copywriters: Murphy Chou, Donghai Liu
Photographer: Scott Newett
Retoucher: Aaron Foster
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ZZbottom's picture

outstanding.

ZZbottom
Activity Score 111

zzbottom

NatalieM's picture

This is a clever idea. I think the copy can get even more colloquial. Throw a contraction in there. "You'll be afraid someone might hear you."

NatalieM
Activity Score 1685
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-Natalie
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whitespace's picture

I'd shorten it to "someone might hear you"

whitespace
Activity Score 1953
Creative Director
postman's picture

Why? Why did they explain it? For me it works perfect without any line.

postman
Activity Score 951
Other
artiam's picture

how about varying the executions: maybe a stereo turned up, or a speaker set facing the door..those are just off the top, there's lots of potential here

artiam
Activity Score 123
sneakyhands's picture

the volume should be one below maximum, so it's not mistaken for muted. also, the blurry vibrator thing is old. like my uncle ralph, was funny, now old.

sneakyhands
Activity Score 1857
Copywriter
inviniti's picture

Erotic Toys = Get High = Loud Moaning = Turning up the TV volume = So? Is this how advertising should be done today? Maybe you should pump the "base" alittle.

inviniti
Activity Score 15
Regional Creative Director
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