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Kateter's picture

dosen't?

from american agency?

ts, ts, ts... copywriter

Kateter
Activity Score 2029
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shaft_drive's picture

wow. spelo. in a headline. i think this ad has not been through the proper check process since it's an unimportant (and unsuccessful) attempt at an award.

shaft_drive
Activity Score 273
Creative Director
teenie's picture

Nice catch.

That's the most interesting part of the ad.

teenie
Activity Score 1894
Copywriter
Jet Propulsion Lab's picture

Guess who also doesn't have the brain?

WOW, this is TRULY horrible!

But then, it's from Wisconsin...

Jet Propulsion Lab
Activity Score 10679
Copywriter
ivan's picture

Typo has been fixed!

ivan
Activity Score 14
Creative Director at Ads of the World
Chough's picture

Well meaning, Im sure, but this series misses by a mile. Unfortunately, I can imagine the target audience (men who abuse/sleep with underage girls) being completey unaffected by this communication, or even worse, turned on by it. This is not pleasant to look at for the majority – but the majority are not the target. This subject has to handled sensitively, with insight. Disturbing CAN be OK, but these are disturbing, wrong, and even counter productive, and I hope they haven't, and never will run. I'd love to hear what the relevant social services think about these.

Chough
Activity Score 147
Creative Director
Raul_0451's picture

VERY WELL SAID CHOUGH, VERY BAD AD

Raul_0451
Activity Score 56
Young & Rubicam Dominican Republic
Eightball's picture

poor

Eightball
Activity Score 200
Marketing Manager
young one's picture

This is wrong!

young one
Activity Score 56
Publicis Amsterdam
adamrich's picture

very very very wrong!

adamrich
Activity Score 48
BJL Manchester
the_wizArt_of_OZ's picture

insufficient ad

the_wizArt_of_OZ
Activity Score 16
Art Director at Art Director
vwray81's picture

Not well executed. My first thought was that this was an ad about dumb models. But after realizing what the message is, something's just not right. It's a serious message with a very silly visual. The visual demeans the importance of the message.

And the typo... are you serious?? Wow.

vwray81
Activity Score 256
Art Director
Angie-chan's picture

seems that promotes it instead of trying to stop it ^_^'

Angie-chan
Activity Score 61
Publicidad Comercial/UNITEC
ecflagcorp's picture

Aside for the misspelling, the head doesn't seem proportioned to the body it was put on. It looks too small. And there is too much shadowing of the face. The face needs more contrast, especially around the mouth.

ecflagcorp
Activity Score 108
Graphic Designer at graphic designer
bknowlden's picture

This makes me feel like I'm the pervert.

bknowlden
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Don Draper's picture

My sentiments exactly! I'm also shocked that the creatives haven't requested this ad be removed, given it has that huge typo. Where's your pride people?

Don Draper
Activity Score 144
Creative Director
BoniS's picture

Oh Gary Mueller... why would you let your name get posted?

BoniS
Activity Score 87

*If you're not satisfied, you can always beat it.

amsterdam73's picture

My god! Dosen't...

amsterdam73
Activity Score 374
Copywriter
Shaka_Zulu's picture

Typo - Shnypo... let's focus on the IDEA. I personally think it's a great campaign. Amazing insight - hits home and straight to the point. It doesn't get more real than this... I'm disgusted by grown men who sleep with teenagers and if this doesn't make you think... then you are in the wrong business. And now about the typo... who gives a f#@k?

Shaka_Zulu
Activity Score 116
Copywriter |

Now... inspire me!

Bye's picture

If you're a copywriter who dismisses a typo in a published ad, then you might be in the wrong business.

Bye
Activity Score 1464
Rekker's picture

come on guys! freedom of speech! whe are not in the united states here?
it should be normal to bring on this problem in an ad.

my only problem here is that it's an insufficient ad

Rekker
Activity Score 123
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Say no more...

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ivan
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