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it's not much of a difference in dubai

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jakartatung's picture

Good thing somebody else did not copy The Economist's look.

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kurtberengeiger's picture

Hmmm... Does anyone else think that there's a pronoun problem here? Or is the right side of my brain just not accepting a mild play on words?

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whitespace's picture

could mean "making it" to the headlines.

"making them" would be better on two occasions of course.

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Martha's picture

making...them

by the way... What is the ad about?

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Misstree's picture

Hmmm...I think the 'OR' is outa place. Shouldn't it be 'The difference between reading headlines AND making it'....i donno...just my take on it.

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The word "headlines" means more than one. The word "it" means one. The headline is structured incorrectly. Should be: The difference between reading the headlines or making them.

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This is just horribly written. period.

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O WISE 1's picture

Incorrect: "I will make the headline tomorrow?" Correct: "I will make the headlines tomorrow?". Nothing wrong in the headline there. We tend to treat it as a singular. Just subtle word play I guess.

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