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fadynabil's picture

really nice concept so so great

fadynabil
Activity Score 11
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sumbody's picture

nice idea, bad layout

sumbody
Activity Score 134
Art Director
Olafski001's picture

idea is OK
layout is terrible

Olafski001
Activity Score 1193
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Wordnerd's picture

Hmm. shouldn't they rather try to make the lawn mower safer? so a child can't start it? strange campaign.. who's the client btw. government?

Wordnerd
Activity Score 6692
Copywriter
teenie's picture

The idea is OK, but the copy isn't very inspiring. If it's to change peoples behaviour, it really needs to have a call to action.

teenie
Activity Score 1894
Copywriter
Charlie Pratt's picture

Yeah, I like the idea of putting the lawn mower in amusement park type environments, but the copy could be much stronger. And for this, as usual, I blame the client, not the writer.

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Charlie Pratt
Activity Score 427
A.G. Pennypacker's picture

I like this idea but the headline is really lazy. And putting them on all three is even lazier. I don't see how this falls on the client Charlie, but using the same line for all three DOES sound like a client move. So it certainly is possible. Short of that, it's my belief that as a writer you should be swinging for the fences every chance you get. And shockingly, this guy let three chances pass him by.

A.G. Pennypacker
Activity Score 607
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Tripioso's picture

I like the headline. It proves you can use special effects on Headlines and still keep it clean.

Tripioso
Activity Score 470
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Graves™'s picture

The visual is nice and clean enough that you don't need that top half. I don't think it ads anything.

Graves™
Activity Score 87
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luwieus's picture

i quite like it the way it is.

luwieus
Activity Score 25
biabitch's picture

the idea is a bit used..kids see ___ as toys, be careful.

biabitch
Activity Score 298
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