Shut up and shave, 3

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Published/Aired: 
February 2015
Barbasol:  Shut up and shave, 3

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Print advertisement created by Savannah College of Art & Design, United States for Barbasol, within the category: Health.

Advertising School: Savannah College of Art & Design, Savannah, USA
Creative Director / Art Director / Copywriter: Reed Sullivan
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Reed Sullivan's picture

Thank you for your feedback and it is appreciated. A student has to absorb everything he can, right? I've been studying as a copywriter, and will continue to follow that path, but thank you for your advice.

Reed Sullivan
Activity Score 6
Savannah College of Art & Design
BAdsoftheworld's picture

Catchy !

BAdsoftheworld
Activity Score 3519
kleenex's picture

I do not think the set of ads are that bad.

kleenex
Activity Score 58791
Web Designer/Developer
Reed Sullivan's picture

Thank you kindly.

Reed Sullivan
Activity Score 6
Savannah College of Art & Design
BAdsoftheworld's picture

So we agree.

BAdsoftheworld
Activity Score 3519
Reed Sullivan's picture

Thank you.

Reed Sullivan
Activity Score 6
Savannah College of Art & Design
Sacrilegend's picture

Reed, you're a student, so I'm hoping you're keen on taking some feedback.

1) Don't be like so many of the asshats in this industry. Good enough is simply not good enough. You've seen this tone everywhere already. Why replicate it? Take us somewhere new.

2) The look of these is great. Really nice craft, man. You're using maybe one too many techniques, but I get it—you're young and want to flex your muscles.

3) You're not a writer. Get a writer who can complement your strengths.

I won't wish you good luck, because you don't need it. So I'll wish you lots of resilience instead.

Cheers,
Another ad curmudgeon

Sacrilegend
Activity Score 3394
Copywriter
Reed Sullivan's picture

Thank you for your feedback and it is appreciated. A student has to absorb everything he can, right? I've been studying as a copywriter, and will continue to follow that path, but thank you for your advice.

Reed Sullivan
Activity Score 6
Savannah College of Art & Design
Sacrilegend's picture

Then I take back point three. Keep on keeping on.

Sacrilegend
Activity Score 3394
Copywriter
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