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addyhoch10's picture

really nice!

addyhoch10
Activity Score 2592
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the_ashlands's picture

and last but not least....why did they go with 'cool' twice in the copy??? get a thesaurus people...

the_ashlands
Activity Score 1394
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ellehcimeo's picture

you don't think that using "cool" twice speaks to the people who look for jobs abroad? isn't it usually 20 somethings who like to do the nanny thing? and they are, like, totally, like, looking for a, like, totally cool job in, like, a totally cool country.

ellehcimeo
Activity Score 3376
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Yokel's picture

Because sometiomes you need to repeat the language. You can't avoid using every word just once. Depends what you're trying to say. It's just simple - It's cool IF everything is cool.
"It's cool living abroad.
When your job is great/amazing/super." - ? Sounds retarded.
Don't pick holes just for the sake of picking holes.

Yokel
Activity Score 604
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the_ashlands's picture

"dont pick holes for the sake of picking holes???"

first off, im not...there are many words that they could have used in place of either of the 'cools'. it sounds repetative with no payoff this way. if they wanted to use a word twice thats fine, maybe cool is just the wrong word..it sounds uneducated...especially considering its for a school. sorry if you disagree, but then again i dont really care if you do or you dont...

and secondly, dont tell me what to do.

the_ashlands
Activity Score 1394
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www.ashlandic.com

ellehcimeo's picture

the_ashlands... what if we give you money to do what we say? if i give you $20, will you dance like a monkey? (just kidding. i so dig you!)

ellehcimeo
Activity Score 3376
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the_ashlands's picture

hahah..ill totally dance a lil jig for ya for twenty dukes!

...i understand you have to abide by the clients wallet, but i just feel the copy wasnt fully explored here.

the_ashlands
Activity Score 1394
Graphic Designer |

www.ashlandic.com

elmikel's picture

I like all of them...Great art direction and clear message...

elmikel
Activity Score 1147
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Tero Ylitalo's picture

ellehcimeo, like, exactly. :)

"Pastes like shit."

Tero Ylitalo
Activity Score 628
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ellehcimeo's picture

Tero, you totally, like, get me! That's so, like, cool!

ellehcimeo
Activity Score 3376
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Have Heart's picture

I like the concept, but the situations could be way more surprising. Great art/photography, but the copy sucks.

Have Heart
Activity Score 922
Art Director
A. J. SMITH's picture

Its a clear message, but it doesn't really turn me on.

it is ok. 6/10.

A. J. SMITH
Activity Score 2822
whitespace's picture

... you want a babysitter to turn you on?

whitespace
Activity Score 1953
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ellehcimeo's picture

well, that is how a lot of marriages end...

ellehcimeo
Activity Score 3376
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tiny_wordz's picture

i'mrite with u on that banjo_strings

tiny_wordz
Activity Score 325
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Farshidcw's picture

if there was something hot and annoying in visual, they would be better. imagin there is some steam
above the baby's shit or in the other ad the man's hip is coming into contact with a hot pan or pot...

Farshidcw
Activity Score 42
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Pros are loyal lovers.

Corona Raymaker's picture

Yeah, this one is better than the first 2. Messed up children always work well to horrify one ...^^

Corona Raymaker
Activity Score 549
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Vive La Aducation!

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