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Excavator

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May 2011

Description

Print advertisement created by Traffic, New Zealand for Axxis, within the category: Industrial, Agriculture.

Caption

There are better ways to build

Advertising Agency: Traffic, New Zealand
Design Director: Barry Bloomfield
Strategy and Marketing analysis: Scott Pilkington
Advertising Creative / Art Direction / Graphic Design: Gareth Poley
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Bob.C's picture

Ok, safe but good approach, could be more exciting visually. Given the product I think that the copy works well but should be smoother near the end.

Bob.C
Activity Score 1157
Copywriter at Convince Ltd |

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jackmancer2017's picture

I don't like the approach and I don't think it's a good one. It's safe indeed - just a very basic thought to it "Hey let's show a bad example and then say how it should be done".

jackmancer2017
Activity Score 6992
Copywriter at Editor/Student
Rotzgoht's picture

I get it, I get it. Wood is the villain. Like any bla idea this has a million legs, but all of them are atrophied. You could do an endless stream of things made of wood, but how does that get us back to steel? Each Ad has the same lines, and do not reference the image. Looks nice. Kind of lazy. It's always easier to show the problem than the solution. What if things normally made out of wood were made out of steel? Would that be better? I don't know. Bla.

Rotzgoht
Activity Score 186
Billoughsby's picture

So-so ad, but I do like the handmade prop. (This isn't CGI... is it?)

Billoughsby
Activity Score 5150
Art Director |

That's it.

kleenex's picture

I like it.

kleenex
Activity Score 52674
Web Designer/Developer
sattvikm's picture

Doesn't stand out.

sattvikm
Activity Score 10
Copywriter at New Delhi
ace85le's picture

Too predictable.

ace85le
Activity Score 3935
Marketing Manager |

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bhuvneshwar.chd's picture

like it.

bhuvneshwar.chd
Activity Score 989
Graphic Designer at artist, illustator, designer |

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Manoma's picture

Nice realisation, but poor idea...

Manoma
Activity Score 1108
Copywriter
Glut's picture

nicely done, weak idea.

Glut
Activity Score 3935
Public Relations at Glut. Ideas Boutique.
Tripioso's picture

I love the visual, but don't get the message. Do they use to build with wood in New Zealand rather than concrete or steel?

Tripioso
Activity Score 470
Art Director at Grupo Wisa |

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