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strange,,,.....

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i like

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entropiamonamour's picture

School stuff.

entropiamonamour
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Ed Mintone's picture

Nice catch

Ed Mintone
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kurtberengeiger's picture

I agree.

kurtberengeiger
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SKiZio's picture

Great school stuff!!

SKiZio
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great one!

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SeanMartin's picture

Okay. It took a few seconds to realize you were just re-arranging the letters to form the headline -- and were I just a casual viewer looking at this in a magazine, I wouldnt have bothered. The concept is there, but the execution is too dense and over-styled.

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inat

Thanks, I did'nt make out the anagram.

Tina Dev
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Shouldn't you change your name to God of Advertising?

I think that we all would love to see your amazing work so that we can praise you like you rightfully deserve.

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Tina Dev's picture

inat
I agree. But goodness grace be a little too wary of showering praises. I have my doubts that SM is too conceited.
Vanity comes before a fall. Let it not happen.

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No.
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corre's picture

it's true that it might take time for some to figure out the idea and that most won't be bothered.
but, having figured it out, I quite dig it. and plus, that makes me feel smart. who doesn't like ads that make viewers feel good about themselves?

corre
Activity Score 196
Renan Correa's picture

This ad is very, very good...but obly for his copywriter.
For me, as a reader, make me think: "ok, they figured out that their letter could be this phrase...ok."
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sneakyhands's picture

i don't think that this anagram is interesting enough for this to work. also, drawing the lines to solve it feels like its hand feeding the audience too much. maybe it's needed, but they might appreciate a chance to figure it out. also, for some reason i want to say 'tidy up your head' instead of the current line, but that has the connotation that the consumer is dirty minded. this is good thinking, but you're not there yet. i'd keep the tag, but try to get away from anagrams for a while and maybe something will hit you.

sneakyhands
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Guest commenter's picture

Ok my resolve here would be to apply it to the connection you've made to avoid the contrived factor; have a waiter offering a tray up to an unhappy seated customer where the aspirin powder forms the lines as well as letters. I'm afraid to say that that will still leave you with not much more than a competent piece. My guess is you spent too much time trying to get into the space of cryptic twists. Look at insights, then stylize your art direction to re-inforce the thought:)

D. Droga.

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STRTLRS's picture

What the *#%! did you just say?

www.storytellerscreative.com

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I think, therefore... yeah.

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He said he's an idiot no-talent hack ass-clown.

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whitespace's picture

Wow.

whitespace
Activity Score 1953
Creative Director
STRTLRS's picture

This is just too forced and honestly not very pleasing to the eye. Shame on you Mr. Art Director for adding drop shadows to strokes. That's a no no.

www.storytellerscreative.com

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superb!!!

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whitewhite's picture

good work dear. Applause to copywriter

whitewhite
Activity Score 251
Copywriter
JORDI's picture

Interesante, aunque no hace falta ser tan cutre pegando las letras. Y con el papel tan amarillo da un aire bastante sucio que no le conviene en nada al producto.

JORDI
Activity Score 96
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better quicktime...

miko1aj's picture

great work. It's definitely NOT usual school thing.
clap clap.

miko1aj
Activity Score 3082
ahpitt's picture

Yes, I can feel the pain.

ahpitt
Activity Score 342
Art Director at Art Director
Guest commenter's picture

not one comment on the poor type choice for "tidy your head up"? Khaki should be thrown into the ocean with comic sans. this ad is just grunge for the sake of grunge, i dont get the connection other than the art director drawing lines for me, its too forced.

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carljoshua's picture

clever

carljoshua
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capywriter's picture

good idea, I saw it immediately. Nice one!

capywriter
Activity Score 5513
Copywriter at Freelance
des4graphic's picture

Its nice

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Dreaming's picture

school stuff,,,,,,.................!bt nice arrange

Dreaming
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Creative Director at Ad agency as a creative head cum copy writer
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