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Blahg's picture

Really, really poor production all round.

Blahg
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Spanky's picture

ok, you posted clips from a video game and call it a commercial? please tell me you're still in school.

Spanky
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eviolina's picture

it was for a school,we made this by ourself.Our budjet was 0euro..watch the idea first...

eviolina
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Spanky's picture

i hate to break this to you, but this is very, very bad. worse than death even. seriously, i'd rather die than have my name attached to this. the only reason i said i hope you're still in school is there still may be hope for you. not much, perhaps. but hope is hope.

Spanky
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Bye's picture

Being in school isn't an excuse for a bad idea.

Bye
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kalpesh78's picture

horrible stuff.... i mean how can you even do this.... yuck. (sorry i don't usually speak like this)

kalpesh78
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Chief Creative Officer at Uniqish Brand Creche |

ideas....30 minutes nahi toh free.

pixelbomb1's picture

I like it. I think it's directed to teens. If you're a teen you would be watching this. catch your attention.

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thirty6chambers's picture

well, at least they didn't try to render the stuff themselves and come out looking like 90's 3D animation.

thirty6chambers
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Scuba Steve's picture

I think i just threw up in my mouth.

Scuba Steve
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If it doesn't sell, its not creative.

eviolina's picture

you have to watch the idea,not the esecution..

eviolina
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Blahg's picture

Execution is critical to the idea and vice versa. You can't have one without the other. Stop telling people to look past the execution to the idea, we're trying to tell you that the execution is so bad we can't get past it to the idea.

You are saying you're studying communication, execution is an incredibly important part of that.

Blahg
Activity Score 616
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Pouts's picture

the idea is taken from the Coke Side of Life. So it is not original! you are influenced by an ad which makes this idea really really weak. Sorry guys but that's true if you want to do something great make sure you make things that are fresh.

Pouts
Activity Score 693
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eviolina's picture

the idea was produced first of the coke side of life...it was made for the road safety.The target was the child that not paying attention to the street.

eviolina
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kalpesh78's picture

whatever it is.. some effort needs to be done by the creative people. credit goes to rockstar games. (and i hate the ending where the PSP falls off the guy's hand)

kalpesh78
Activity Score 2578
Chief Creative Officer at Uniqish Brand Creche |

ideas....30 minutes nahi toh free.

twelve_noon's picture

exposure to hard critique is part of our job, so take the reactions of people in the forum into consideration and target to thinking original. Nevermind execution, if this was a good idea people would appreciate that much. I think that being at school gives you time to evolve and improve the way you think.

twelve_noon
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JamurPutih's picture

this is the field of harrasements.
enjoy dear brother and sister...

JamurPutih
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end of joy, enjoy

laylowmoe's picture

Whew. You got balls showing your face here and taking everyone's potshots.

I think the comments you've been getting have been entirely unfair. But if you've been here long enough, you should have known not to expect any better. The regulars here are the kind of so-called "creatives" who comment on typeface and layout and colours but can't appreciate a simple, clever idea.

That said, I think your idea is solid.

laylowmoe
Activity Score 328
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Nthngmn's picture

Brutal. Even when I was in school I never produced anything as bad. School isn't an excuse. And the biggest problem is that every where outside of a forum you're not there to defend your work.

Nthngmn
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Guest's picture

very solid idea...keep up the good work

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