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raghavendra's picture

like the connection between the line and the visuals

raghavendra
Activity Score 232
Copywriter
AmOgodzzz's picture

The yellow puddles under the urinals are a little too heavy-handed and unnecessary. Seems like they just wanted to do ambient no matter what. The message is fine without the puddles, although I'm guessing they assumed it wouldn't be as exciting. The IV drip thing on the lower right works best, I think.

AmOgodzzz
Activity Score 824
Copywriter at School of Visual Arts
the_lizard_king's picture

The dark yellow urine stains look gross. i agree the iv drip can convey the idea fine. I mean its alittle too hard to enter into the loo and see something like that!!! yuck!

the_lizard_king
Activity Score 1257
Copywriter at Forecast advertising |

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rolling.stone's picture

dark yellow urine stains seems disgusting

rolling.stone
Activity Score 2741
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Juan Martinez's picture

don't like it.

Juan Martinez
Activity Score 110
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