hi, advertising fellas.

Could you please help me by give me feedbacks on these works?
I'm sorry I haven't art direct it, as I cant really do art directing.
Just please comment it from the idea point of view and strategy point of view if you want.
And if anybody is an art director could you please spare me direction ideas for this?

Mr Kipling Cakes
Mr Kipling Cakes
Mr Kipling Cakes
Mr Kipling Cakes