critique please.. thnx!

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why twice coffee

why twice coffee pot?

Anyway, i think it has potential, maybe think in same way,
but this is not persuasive enough.

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You need to push this much

You need to push this much further. Slapping a DaVinci reference in there is a gimmick not an idea.

Think this through

Good is the enemy of great.

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The first cofeepot is the

The first cofeepot is the original design, the basic form ( traditional ). The pack-shot is the new machine based on the original.

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