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Excuse my bad photo editing skills, i'm still learning...I was between "The ultimate social networking machine" and "Now, there's room for your mother-in-law (yay)" but i liked the first one better. I know both copies suck but i'm more interested in the idea itself. Please critique.

To be honest, I don't like

To be honest, I don't like the copy. It makes me think that there are built in computers connected to the Internet so kids can play on Facebook.

That being said, I think you can make a powerful statement with the "people stickers," I'm just not sure that the artwork does that now. Maybe do a really exaggerated number of stickers, like take up 2 rows

Basically, I think you've got some more work to do

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