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Something in your teeth.

I'm not feeling this ad.

I'm not feeling this ad. First, I think you're trying to hard to make the headline fit the ad. The sentence just doesn't sound right. Second, this feels like a first attempt. It reads like it was the first idea that popped in your head and instead of simply writing it down and trying to build off of it you simply went with it. Overall, it's pretty ordinary and feels like something that has been done before. (Sorry if this came off harsh, that really isn't my intention.)

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