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aryjoecreatives's picture

Thank you!! www.behance.net/aryjoecreatives for more of our work.

aryjoecreatives
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jackmancer2017's picture

It was fun till I read the swag-logo.

Free tip; "I", as in first person, is always in capital. Also in "I'm".

jackmancer2017
Activity Score 6992
Copywriter at Editor/Student
eins-eins-null's picture

i agree. the "swag" is one too much.

eins-eins-null
Activity Score 896
Copywriter
copyjoe's picture

Thanks for the comment, we will look more into the 'Swag' & change the grammar.

copyjoe
Activity Score 7
Copywriter at student
kabirahmed's picture

Fucking Awesome! (y)

kabirahmed
Activity Score 40
Planner
copyjoe's picture

Thanks! Much appreciated.

copyjoe
Activity Score 7
Copywriter at student
Owolawi's picture

Awesome rhyme,very mellow and flows quite well.

Owolawi
Activity Score 1534
Copywriter at DDB |

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aryjoecreatives's picture

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aryjoecreatives
Activity Score 8
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Siddarth Basavaraj's picture

It drove me through those standing tall yesteryear's of VW, nice :)

Siddarth Basavaraj
Activity Score 1673
Copywriter at Adsyndicate Services Pvt. Ltd. |

Love creating ads..

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aryjoecreatives
Activity Score 8
nexus/h - Sunderland university |

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Shawali's picture

Nice copy except that god awful pun and the use of the no less awful word "swag".

The art direction is kinda dull and not very evocative of that nostalgic feeling in the copy.

Shawali
Activity Score 8442
Art Director at freelance visual creative/Paris, France |

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

Nike Diesel's picture

i feel your comment

Nike Diesel
Activity Score 13630
Art Director
kleenex's picture

nice ads.

kleenex
Activity Score 51126
Web Designer/Developer
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