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morse's picture

The headline doesn't make me curious enough to start reading.

morse
Activity Score 18087
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Klara K.'s picture

Agreed. Also the headline is written in the style of "what's in it for us" instead of "what's in it for you". And that makes me want to read it even less.

Klara K.
Activity Score 3343
Charles University in Prague
eins-eins-null's picture

yes. (a real pity regarding the effort it takes to right a loooooongcopy.)

eins-eins-null
Activity Score 896
Copywriter
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