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Retry

Published/Aired: 
March 2008
Sony Print Ad -  Retry

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Print advertisement created by Sir J.J. Institute of Applied Art, India for Sony, within the category: Gaming.

Advertising School: Sir JJ Institute of Applied Art, Mumbai, India
Art Director: Pavel Roy
Photographer: Kaustubh Kamat
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Mr.Top's picture

Oh JESUS CHRIST... this is so bad.

Mr.Top
Activity Score 728
vote4pedro's picture

hmmm... student work. a little off brand. might work better if you make it an ad for a specific game like doom.

vote4pedro
Activity Score 4601
Copywriter
Salet's picture

Off brand? Really?
You're off brand.

Salet
Activity Score 288
Copywriter
vote4pedro's picture

ah, the wit of 10 year olds. charming.

vote4pedro
Activity Score 4601
Copywriter
nice gaijin's picture

quite a stretch to pull this out of the forum.

nice gaijin
Activity Score 815
jazarah's picture

awful

jazarah
Activity Score 1262
bknowlden's picture

If this was done by TBWA everyone would love it. I thibk "retry" is a little lame, but I personally think it's right on brand with mush of the work PS3 has done.

http://adsoftheworld.com/media/print/ps2_bodies

http://adsoftheworld.com/media/print/playstation_2_rubick

bknowlden
Activity Score 3647
Art Director |

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brandon

www.brandonknowlden.com

Mr Hughes's picture

You are so wrong Brandon.

Neither of these ads suggest that you'll be so absorbed in your game that you won't notice a suicide bomber blast people to pieces.

This ad is wrong, wrong, wrong.

Mr Hughes
Activity Score 386
Copywriter
bknowlden's picture

It doesn't say suicide bomber, it says he's playing a game that ripped him to pieces. And why the suicide bomber reference? Is it because the ad is coming out of India?

bknowlden
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brandon

www.brandonknowlden.com

Mr Hughes's picture

It's what it looks like.

Mr Hughes
Activity Score 386
Copywriter
vote4pedro's picture

that's what i thought at first glance too. until you notice it's the same face.

i think it would help if they were of an older person, in their 30's or so. would also help if the setting and photography were more refined. might help to add additional people too. maybe if it were in an airport where it makes sense that he'd be sitting around waiting. and everyone else around him is oblivious to the body parts.

vote4pedro
Activity Score 4601
Copywriter
FlyingDogs's picture

I disagree. This is what I get: The guy played once and got blown up into pieces, so he's sitting there and giving it another shot.

I think it's a great concept that falls short on execution.

FlyingDogs
Activity Score 968
Copywriter
Guest's picture

Only to a person who doesn't know much about gaming.

I barely play console games at all, and the implication of "retry" is immediately evident to me.

That said, the idea does seem a little forced. The photography and retouching have a lot to do with it though. I agree with a previous comment that the setting could be different. The idea needs a little context to reinforce the idea that this guy is obsesses with the game, playing it over and over again.

The idea is a good place to start, but needs to have been worked further.

Guest
Mr Hughes's picture

OMG. Disgusting and very, very bad taste.

Mr Hughes
Activity Score 386
Copywriter
adstrike's picture

OMG this is bad... playstation is schizophrenia, paranoia, bizarreness... playstation communication is how the player feels but without being so literal... out of brand.

adstrike
Activity Score 334
Copywriter
vidya.shankaran's picture

Terrible Ad.... Totally lost .. what is the ad trying to say???

vidya.shankaran
Activity Score 724
eddietanhk's picture

this ads sure band on Asia... too bad!!!

eddietanhk
Activity Score 64
Graphic Designer at Junior designer
Ad_Man's picture

What I read from this ad is that you have multiple lives in the game. You can die as many times as you want in the game, even blow your arms, and head!
What's so wrong with it?

Ad_Man
Activity Score 826

Think it for a while.
Then, in anytime, it will come to your mind as an idea.

bknowlden's picture

I'm with you, I think it's great.

bknowlden
Activity Score 3647
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brandon

www.brandonknowlden.com

vidya.shankaran's picture

Gee! Now i guess it makes sense..!... but execution could use some improvement....

vidya.shankaran
Activity Score 724
Guest's picture

i agree with ya

Guest
Charlie Pratt's picture

This ad is targeted towards gamers. Gamers are used to "dying" thousands upon thousands of times. In the wrong context, this is in poor taste. In the right context, this ad would work.

http://www.charlieprattdesign.com

Charlie Pratt
Activity Score 427
ryzhkov's picture

The gaming is about gameplay, not about opportunity to try again of you died.

And, even if that opportunity were important, it's typical for gaming in general, not for portable gaming.

ryzhkov
Activity Score 57
Copywriter
idt's picture

cut the guy some slack, he's a student.

he has the right idea, but perhaps the execution is what fails. PS has always had this surrealistic finish - this one looks too realistic for comfort.

It could have been a mountain of bodies of the same person with the same clothes. It's not necessary to have them torn apart.

I think a line like 'live more' or 'live again' would have worked better. 'RETRY' can actually work against PSP. It's like "bad product, try again."

idt
Activity Score 44
Torpedo Ideas
wahwah's picture

Student work...come on people...i bet you wankers can't even come up with this

wahwah
Activity Score 120
Ogilvy&Mather
JamurPutih's picture

hahaha
all the award scammers are wankers!
hahaha!

good student work anyway!

JamurPutih
Activity Score 263
Art Director |

end of joy, enjoy

porkchop's picture

yeah i agree! its awful.

porkchop
Activity Score 15
tanmay's picture

It's a simple idea which has been executed decently by a student. I find it hard to believe that so many people aren't getting it.

tanmay
Activity Score 91
Mr Hughes's picture

we are getting it. It's just very bad taste. Get it?

Mr Hughes
Activity Score 386
Copywriter
lizcopywrite's picture

What I get, Mr. Hughes, is that you are an idiot who can't see past his own small minded prejudices and inability to relate to a younger audience. Suicide bomber? Really? That comment disgusts me, not the ad.

This ad speaks to gamers, which you obviously are not. They're numb to the gore of this image, all they see is the subject's determination to get to the next level. I'm not saying this ad is amazing but the idea and strategy are right. Cut him some slack.

lizcopywrite
Activity Score 9
Copywriter at 22 Squared
Garg0yle's picture

It's bad work because PS2 successfully conveys the 'graphic content' of some of its 'fantasy' games by using surrealistic imagery... which works without being gross. Here realistic imagery is being used to convey the surreal... and hence ends up just looking gross. Showing bits and pieces of flesh and gore scattered around will sure get attention, but it is a cheap 'shock tactic' to get attention, and creates the wrong aura around the brand.

Like Luke Sul said in his book "Hey Whipple, squeeze this" ...you can get the attention of people sitting in a room by spitting on the table... very effectively, but that doesn't make it good advertising! That's easy. The real challenge is to capture attention without being gross. By being clever or unique or interesting.

That's why this is bad work. Back to the drawing board.

Garg0yle
Activity Score 144
IBD, Mumbai |

ShanGhai!

adcook's picture

BAD IDEA BADLY DONE. Surely the teachers at this 'Ad school' need to act responsibly and direct their students work. There's no excuse for bad work - not even from a student or a so called 'ad school'.

adcook
Activity Score 156
Other
whitespace's picture

I'm among the rare few that likes this then.

whitespace
Activity Score 1953
Creative Director
Have Heart's picture

I don't know what's wrong with this ad. It's a fresh twist and I understood it instantly with the line "retry". Great ad and outstanding for a student work!

Have Heart
Activity Score 922
Art Director
Disco Munky's picture

Almost there. Needs a better setting. As it is, it looks like he's killed a bunch of people an then sat down to play his PSP till the cops baton him around the inner colon with their meat truncheons.

Disco Munky
Activity Score 3890
Art Director |

Doin' it for the points

chintan ruparel's picture

im with the above 4 comments...

chintan ruparel
Activity Score 1516
Copywriter |

~ old habits die hard, older ones never do ~

Wordnerd's picture

This ia a really good idea. But i guess the casting is crap - it took me too long to get thats the same guy. for me, this needs somone less average looking.

Wordnerd
Activity Score 6692
Copywriter
HowardRoark's picture

I actually love the ad. Im sure my teenager nephews would looove it. Gross. Shocking...irreverent....just how they like them. I think this is one of the FEW ads I've seen here that at least try to talk to the target audience...not only to the creative's ego. Yes IT IS GROSS....so what...it is also a joke right? you might find it of bad taste....we should ask the teens that play those "kill or be killed" kind of games what do they think about it. Reading the majority of comments makes me feel like Im in a meeting room sitting in front of a mediocre-scared-shitless-of-losing-his-job brand manager...hahaha. Personally I don't like the ad. I just think teenagers (at least in My country) would love it. Because they KNOW how does it feel to die again and again trying and re-trying.

HowardRoark
snolet's picture

Possibly I could like the idea, if the art was just a little bit acceptable. It is so badly done, that the idea is ruined. Even a student work must fit quality standards...

Je pourrais probablement aimer l'idée, si la direction artistique était tout au moins acceptable. Le montage est tellement mal fait, que ça ruine l'idée. Même un travail d'étudiant devrait respecter certains standards de qualité...

snolet
Activity Score 104
Art Director at Propage
Mr Hughes's picture

That's the wonderful thing about advertising - it's so polarising. On one side you got those who know what they are talking about and on the other there are all the people who don't.

Mr Hughes
Activity Score 386
Copywriter
Typeknerd's picture

Get off your high horses people. I'll agree with the handful in here that say this is a good idea, poor execution. I will also agree with those that have said it is fine if left alone. To the demographic, I think it's perfect. Maybe "Live Again" or some line along that train of thought is not such a bad idea. This is student work, give it a break. In school you are supposed to be pushing the envelope, in this case, while tasteless to some, it gets the job done. Before ripping this student and the 'ad school' from which it came, look at your old work or your current work and check your bitterness at the door.

Typeknerd
Activity Score 9
Graphic Designer
360 grados's picture

mmmmmm

360 grados
Activity Score 305
Graphic Designer
Hiten86's picture

A spank for everyone who thinks this ad isnt good, i'm not saying its great! but its does put the message forward. .
yeah looking at it from the eyes of a 30 year old creative wouldnt give me the same answers from within, but being a gamer (and creative) myself, it hits the nail right on spot!
Tell me, How many 15-20 year old gamers would look at it and say 'gross'?
It plainly fuels the desire to play or own or whatever!
Bingo!

Hiten86
Activity Score 72
Symbiosis Institute of Design |

Devil is in the details,
Lets keep it simple!

http://www.simplycircular.wordpress.com

anshulscreation's picture

Pavel, its a really nice ad, and the idea is great 2.
and dude ur college really rocks.
&
well i wanted 2 know that how was ur ad selected 2 be posted in archive section????

have a look at this 2
http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/exhibition/nikeid_customize_your_nike_p...

anshulscreation
Activity Score 40
Art Director at OgilvyOne
pavel roy's picture

"well i wanted 2 know that how was ur ad selected 2 be posted in archive section????" i didnt get this line??...can u explain me??

pavel roy
Activity Score 43
commercial art student/ sir jj institute of applied art
gmint7's picture

:::J:::

good ad bad taste

RETRY is a bad line.. there is no selling strat. not the right one at least...

especially when selling that gamer sucks at game and keep dying... so that you can play again and repeat..

execution is fine..

gmint7
Activity Score 2675
Art Director at ad grad @ S Francisco |

:::J:::

sooraj's picture

EXECUTION MANNN.....NEVER FORGET TO PUT IN 110 PERCENT EFFORT.. BECAUSE JUST GEETIN A GOOD IDEA IS NOT GOOD ENOUGH... P.S MORE EMPHASIS NEEDED TOWARDS BRAND..

sooraj
Activity Score 14
bangalore
Disco Munky's picture

I beg to differ. A solid idea can stand out no matter the level of execution. The problem with this one is the idea. It doesn't relate to portable gaming as much as just gaming in general. That should have been pointed out by whoever was in charge/supervising.

Disco Munky
Activity Score 3890
Art Director |

Doin' it for the points

bottleHeD's picture

I have no idea why people are panning this so badly. It's student work, and perhaps he couldn't afford to hire a photographer or a studio to get the perfect light or visuals.

As for the idea, i caught on immediately. Perhaps Mr Hughes is deeply prejudiced that he immediately equates dark skin to a terrorist of suicide bomber.

bottleHeD
Activity Score 90
Art Director at OgilvyOne
Guest commenter's picture

this is vey cool. I study advertising too and i understand the message 'retry' it's like saying he has died so many times in the game but is still able to go on playing because of the retry... Very nice idea. Mr hughes so look at it subjectively.. in terms of gore i am very weak at heart.. i HATE gore.. but i like the idea of the ad.. very nicely done :) kudos!

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