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nikkii's picture

its a cute ad

nikkii
Activity Score 14
Copywriter at New Delhi
monicamexico's picture

The line needs work. Try "Exclusive new plan for current students." You don't need "only".

monicamexico
Activity Score 830
crisis's picture

It could be better, but adding another adjective isn't going to solve the problem.

crisis
Activity Score 187
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R. Rinaldi's picture

Nice try.

R. Rinaldi
Activity Score 686
Singapore
walkingbuddha's picture

shit

walkingbuddha
Activity Score 188
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karaba's picture

made me smile at first sight

karaba
Activity Score 112
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