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me thinks's picture
me thinks
Activity Score 722

Motivating copy and excellent art direction. Like it.

wgeddes's picture
Activity Score 298

interesting art direction, but WHY? is there some reason it should look like a medieval manuscript?

thirty6chambers's picture
Activity Score 1464

the copy is boring and predictable. the art direction stinks. this ad really shows that they know how to use a scanner but can't do layouts.

varatphong's picture
Activity Score 78

There's nothing like an insult to get the blood flowing and kick start one's motivation. Works better than the Qi I get from my Puerh Tea )


addyhoch10's picture
Activity Score 2592

nice copy but bad art + typography

ellehcimeo's picture
Activity Score 3376

They could have pushed the art direction more, An Illuminated Manuscript is so beautiful, this one falls short by using red and blue only. It looks cheap I think.
Nice copy though, that's for sure.

Shut Theory's picture
Shut Theory
Activity Score 515

art+copy, the perfect balance, neither is great, as a matter of fact, neither should be any better, they work together just fine

• ω •'s picture
• ω •
Activity Score 193

I feel some flaws on the blue typo. But overall, inviting to look at n read.

No fixed abode's picture
No fixed abode
Activity Score 380

I agree. Nice copy. Good old fashioned communication