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Phil Lestino's picture

As Homer would have said.... "DOH"

Phil Lestino
Activity Score 1684
Phil Lestino's picture

As Homer would have said.... "DOH"

Phil Lestino
Activity Score 1684
somecopywriter's picture

Love, love, love this ad.

somecopywriter
Activity Score 1113
Copywriter at Boomtown
adda's picture
adda
Activity Score 35
Shawali's picture

??? It's totally not the same idea....

Shawali
Activity Score 8442
Art Director at freelance visual creative/Paris, France |

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

Wordfruit's picture

I like it.

I'd say the copy could have got into the more storied stuff like "an alien that wants to call home" quicker. Rather than just having names of objects at the start.

I guess you want to get the idea of a whole list of stuff across quickly, but I'm guessing some people will read just the first few, get the idea, and turn the page.

With some more storied snippets at the beginning -- like maybe from the 3rd or 4th item -- I'm thinking there might be more intrigue, keeping people on the page, and appreciating the ad a little longer.

Wordfruit
Activity Score 1023
sacrilegend's picture

More like this, please.

sacrilegend
Activity Score 3394
Copywriter
andylefty's picture

There's something that makes me feel it must have been done before.
It makes it difficult to judge.

andylefty
Activity Score 4535
Graphic Designer at Central Saint Martins College of Art and Design
juanix's picture

Done...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_1PoTvIXSxM

translate:
Thanks dad.
what is it?
It's a formula 1 car?
It's a super hero who demolished buildings?
a pirate ship ...?
a castle full of soldiers?

PS: (Rasti = Lego)

juanix
Activity Score 3
Bamboo Marketing Online's picture

I have seen some like this before, but I like so much.

Bamboo Marketin...
Activity Score 190
Creative Director at Marketing |

https://www.wallesster.com

kleenex's picture

simple.

kleenex
Activity Score 51110
Web Designer/Developer
Emily Blawyn's picture

simple, nice

Emily Blawyn
Activity Score 114
Graphic Designer
Sophie Campbel's picture

very good

Sophie Campbel
Activity Score 164
Ava Spears's picture

good ad, very good, simple

Ava Spears
Activity Score 144
Anne's picture

Simple, classic and super super good.

Anne
Activity Score 508
Art Director
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