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May 2011

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Executive Creative Director: Paul Venables
Sr. Art Director: Tavia Holmes
Copywriter: Paul Venables
Production House: XYZ
Print Producer: David Russ

Account Manager: Leigh Davidson

Print advertisement created by Venables Bell & Partners, United States for Marin County Public Schools, within the category: Education.

Advertising Agency: Venables Bell & Partners, USA
Group Account Director: Erik Petersen
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Bob.C's picture

I like the premise of this, but the copy feels unfocused and too explanatory - just three paragraphs would have been more effective.

It feels seems like the copywriter didn't edit the first version of the text as there is a lot that simply doesn't work (it's an honest mistake, at some point etc).

Bob.C
Activity Score 1157
Copywriter at Convince Ltd |

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Kriativity's picture

okay okay..

Kriativity
Activity Score 414
ace85le's picture

this whole campaign sucks.

ace85le
Activity Score 3935
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Bob.C's picture

I like the premise of this, but the copy feels unfocused and too explanatory - just three paragraphs would have been more effective.

It feels seems like the copywriter didn't edit the first version of the text as there is a lot that simply doesn't work (it's an honest mistake, at some point etc).

Bob.C
Activity Score 1157
Copywriter at Convince Ltd |

= http://we-convince.com/ =

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