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Besha's picture

weird!

Besha
Activity Score 295
Art Director
Conceptual-eyes's picture

FIRE THE COPYWRITER. 'MYTH' is being used in accurately. They mean't to write 'legend'

Conceptual-eyes
Activity Score 1475
Copywriter
chinaski's picture

"in accurately"? Hmmm, very ironic.

chinaski
Activity Score 951
Copywriter
PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture

my thoughts exactly.

PaulyG_fill in ...
Activity Score 1148
Copywriter
HOLA's picture

bad retouch. rough and disturbing.
_________

Simplify.

HOLA
Activity Score 82
Graphic Designer |

_________

Simplify.
www.holadesignstudio.com

PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture

um, Marilyn wasn't a myth, she was a legend.

PaulyG_fill in ...
Activity Score 1148
Copywriter
TopJeff's picture

Maybe it's a secret message. Maybe there's a conspiracy.... maybe she WAS a myth.

Maybe I need more sleep.

Jeff

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TopJeff
Activity Score 479
Marketing Manager
Conceptual-eyes's picture

Fire Michele Pieri!

Conceptual-eyes
Activity Score 1475
Copywriter
icvisuals's picture

...and Barbara Ghiotti. How did they pitch this to client? and why did the client decide to run these. Not good.

icvisuals
Activity Score 24
Graphic Designer |

iz the wiz

twelve_noon's picture

i wouldn't crucify the idea so fast. I think it's there and links well to the brand. The execution is a bit grotesque makin it ambiguous. It just needed work... As for michele pieri, she's excused... come on guys the idea obviously run in italian press and not everyone's fluent in english. We get the gist of it...

twelve_noon
Activity Score 617
Creative Director
JamurPutih's picture

IMHO,

a myth is something that you don't really sure that it really exists....
a legend is something that is memorable...

if you want to make a copy in english, sure you have to know what to write, right?

JamurPutih
Activity Score 263
Art Director |

end of joy, enjoy

Vicky's picture

The retouch in Elvis is much better... this looks amateur.

Vicky
Activity Score 375
Creative Director
Yokel's picture

That was Elvis?! Looked more like some little pointy eared goblin

Yokel
Activity Score 604
Art Director
Stigset's picture

The retouchng isn't very convincing, but this isn't an agency job, it's just a personnal project, so we shouldn't be so hard on these guys.

Stigset
Activity Score 1454
Art Director
Boxey's picture

copy makes no sense.

Boxey
Activity Score 8879
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