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addyhoch10's picture

nice idea but i think changing the perspective so the bright spots would really look like white linen would work way better.

oh, and there are still stains on the left one

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Vibe's picture

Look force, it can be interesting but not on this one.

Vibe
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pixelbomb1's picture

learn your engrish "look forced" past tense. not look force. where? is the force luke? look force. over there, look force.

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stereodeluxe's picture

to offend someone for his poor english. hmm. seems like ive seen this somewhere already. not very interesting. could be something ive see in cannes in 1995?
cut that crap out. mr "slicks my best friend". and being an expert on foreign languages, im sure u´ll find out what " geh scheissn du arrogantes fick huren oaschloch." means.

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pixelbomb1's picture

excuse me mister, first off, you don't know what started this. so please back-off and I did not say I am an expert. so, please before you get involved do your research. Thank you.

I know you're saying something about arrogance. "pakakana scheskoff" i don't know if i said right or wrote it right.

but please i am asking you, do your research first and find out where all this came from.

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Vibe's picture

Now excuse me too miss pixelbomb, I dont know how it started too. I just notice that you tailing on every comment I post as if I'm the only commenter in there. Whats ya problem?!

Vibe
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addyhoch10's picture

sorry stereo but your 'swearing' doesn't even really make sense in german or austrian. what exactly is a fick huren oaschloch?

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stereodeluxe's picture

swearing in vienna can sometimes sound like turret.syndrome outbursts. eine willkürliche aneinanderreihung von kraftausdrücken. und den sinn kann sich der rezipient selbst ausschnapsen. (der ausdruck ausschnapsen ruehrt von einem allseits populaeren kartenspiel "schnapsen" dass besonders gern in geselligen runden in den laendlichen teilen oesterreichs gespielt wird.)

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ripster's picture

no gossip without clashes and news, haha

that is a really nice one, i translate it. And i might add that for the german grammar rules, stereodeluxe was losing his retention completely.

"go crapping you arrogrant fuxx whoxx axxxxhole"

it's beautiful to observe the tight gathering of xes near the end, like the tension curve of a good suspense movie.

your 5.1 channel sound, stereodeluxe, is obviously cutting-edge.

thanks for your close insights

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the_ashlands's picture

learn your engrish "look forced" past tense. not look force. where? is the force luke? look force. over there, look force.

try an 's' after that look and youve got it right there pixel! cheers

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pixelbomb1's picture

Thanks.

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chintan ruparel's picture

i think its a brilliant idea!

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Vibe's picture

Is "English", not engrish you damn mexican,If your so precise on what people type, please do check on your copy before you post.Thanks for your two cents advice

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pixelbomb1's picture

I know what i was trying to say. checkout www.engrish.com

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pixelbomb1's picture

It's English, not "is English"

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Vibe's picture

Yea go check out on adsoftheworld.com for design improvement, not getting worst.

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pixelbomb1's picture

shitty. not "shitie" look he is wearing a "shi tie". are you trying to say his tie is shitty?

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chimie's picture

let's talk about the ads here. please. it's sooo easy to destroy a community.

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ivan's picture

Yes, please!

ivan
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jennywhx's picture

it's so conceptual. am i get it right? tide is a washing powder right.
an interesting copy, perhaps a poem-like would add points to it.

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sold's picture

good idea, a little forced because of the line up...
she get into the room like a ray-x while the bright of the cloths get into the room just for the windows...
paradox, dont you think?

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Ag's picture

I dont know if I`m missing something... Either I dont get it, or it looks very forced... And I dont get why "white clothe should look like the sun light coming into my window"... Is that right??

Any of you "annoyed" girls may clarify this to me?

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ellehcimeo's picture

What on earth do you mean by "annoyed girls"?

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Ag's picture

Jaaaa... Just jokeing about the way some people here discuss about silly staff...

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ellehcimeo's picture

Ya, me too, it's hard to get across a sense of humour sometimes on the interweb. :)
Cool.

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theassailante's picture

quote: " can't we all just get along?"

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Kanti's picture

OK, firstly just a wild guess. I bet that this didn't run. Why? Cause the client didn't get it either. Tide makes everything really white. So based on this given, we've got sunlight hanging off a clothes line. So what, where's the surprise? Where's the reference back to clothing here?
One dimensional, and it tries way too hard. Advertising is meant to be easy to understand, not cryptic.
And why should I be telling you this stuff anyway?

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Ag's picture

Agree...

Ag
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braindrain's picture

It was in Archive last month too, but not sure if that makes it any more likely that it's real. I agree with you though. This is way too artsy and cryptic to be effective. If you're going to do an ad that's this hard to get, the payoff better be worth it. To me, it's not.

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the_ashlands's picture

THERE ARE WAY TOO MANY FUCKING MOSQUITOES IN HERE!!!!!

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ivan's picture

huh?

ivan
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the_ashlands's picture

hahah

everybody was swearing and having all sorts of yelling matches so i figured id join in....i admit it was stupid...but i figured youd have gotten it out of everybody tho...dont you even read your own sensoring requirements?

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addyhoch10's picture

hahah.

"your not making much sense these past couple of days"

*ding* >next round

sorry man, just kiddin'

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the_ashlands's picture

hahahah!

nice one...

however, this should explain my comment a little...

http://adsoftheworld.com/blog/operation/comments_now_moderated

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PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture

Yea, this ad means nothing to me or anyone in the ad agency that I work at. If this is any reflection on the product, I'm not sure that I could even figure out how to do a load.

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PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture

ha, why on earth are people using this forum as a way to battle each other, and quite unimpressively I must say. This is a creative outlet, at least come up with some good insults. But perhaps you should really just add each other to msn so you can really have it out, and then the rest of us don't have to witness it?

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Amigo's picture

Nice Idea Friend,....... but just the perspective of the rope, anyway ...good one!

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Wren's picture

Brilliant!!

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