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PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture

it doesn't need a headline or copy - the guitar speaks for itself. That's the point.

PaulyG_fill in ...
Activity Score 1148
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Bebop's picture

Smart.

Bebop
Activity Score 45
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drizae's picture

As a copywriter, I find these strangely appealing! Beautiful art direction.

drizae
Activity Score 503
Copywriter |

Fail Harder.

Jet Propulsion Lab's picture

Bad headline! I spotted at least three typos in the body copy, too.
Does anybody proofread ads anymore?

Jet Propulsion Lab
Activity Score 10679
Copywriter
Martijn's picture

I like the idea but I think they pusted it too far. I don't think it needs the body, just a headline would have been enough. The art direction is very heavy, I don't really like it. They could have done something really good with the idea (but they didn't).

Martijn
Activity Score 1888
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PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture

it doesn't need a headline or copy - the guitar speaks for itself. That's the point.

PaulyG_fill in ...
Activity Score 1148
Copywriter
Rog's picture

One hit wonder... with two remixes.

Rog
Activity Score 6080
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>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

me thinks's picture

Well said Rog.

me thinks
Activity Score 722
Copywriter
jacksonrabbit's picture

I think notes would have worked much better here than just waves, at least in part of the copy. And three is overkill for this campaign.

jacksonrabbit
Activity Score 280
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bknowlden's picture

I think these are really fresh. hope they do well for the client and in the shows.

bknowlden
Activity Score 3647
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