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A. J. SMITH's picture
Activity Score 2822

Unfortunately, I can't even be bothered to read this much copy.

Shut Theory's picture
Shut Theory
Activity Score 515

and it is not easy to read either! but even if u read the big words, it starts to drift away somewhere in the middle (tanned body!?)

me thinks's picture
me thinks
Activity Score 722

I get excited when I see long copy ads. I started reading immediately and at “ I wouldn’t give up” I gave up.

I don’t know why but I didn’t like this.

picturejockey's picture
Activity Score 658

I don't think I have the patience to read so much copy specially when I can't even make out who the advertiser is.

ellehcimeo's picture
Activity Score 3376

it's an ad for a belt maker.
i'm so sad i read this all the way through.
there is no payoff.
though, i got a little chuckle from taking a good look at this character's sad little floppy twig n berries.'s picture
Activity Score 1021

i would never read the copy but visualy its very nice.

amrita's picture
Activity Score 26

i like the font and the style used...looks visually appealing, but doesn't make
me wait and read the copy....

JTW926's picture
Activity Score 184

so i just finished reading the whole thing, and the only thing i got was....i don't remember. Too long and too complicated...

o.m's picture
Activity Score 354

really bad warping

Rog's picture
Activity Score 6080

Plenty of things to tweak...
But sit this amidst everything else
and this will stick out...
twig 'n' berries 'n all.

I like this.

That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.