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edged's picture

I thought it was produced in Korea. Not in Malaysia.

edged
Activity Score 27
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Jasonzoro's picture

这个要换成旧皮鞋多好~

Jasonzoro
Activity Score 3
morse's picture

Really nice ad.

morse
Activity Score 18024
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Hadrons's picture

What d'ya mean "Let him know..." !
Totally mealy-mouthed copy.

Knowledge will not serve him.
Mothers, just stop serving!

Hadrons
Activity Score 6041

THERE'S NO HEAVIER BURDEN THAN A GREAT POTENTIAL

bate_palmas's picture

bit unfair - its obviously a translation - they mustve meant 'teach'

bate_palmas
Activity Score 1479
Hadrons's picture

How much does 5 seconds of a native English speakers time cost in the grand scheme ?!

Hadrons
Activity Score 6041

THERE'S NO HEAVIER BURDEN THAN A GREAT POTENTIAL

bate_palmas's picture

Well, if they went to all that trouble the guy would charge for at least half a day :)

Be that as it may, it's just laziness I guess. They wanted to post it on an international website so they just did a quick translate and there you go: a pretty uninteresting advert with a poorly translated headline.

bate_palmas
Activity Score 1479
Alexandra Gregor's picture

Fine ad. I like the chain of donuts. It depicts very well how some just cannot find an end. Some don't feel it naturally and have to learn that what they feel is not actual hunger, it's boredom, appetite, sadness, depression or the try to fill their needs in a way they're not supposed to.

Alexandra Gregor
Activity Score 10
Freelancer for children's books illustrations and web-based illustration
Wordfruit's picture

I think the idea is ok.

I think you should change the line, so you're suggesting the parent should learn, in order to help his/her child -- I think if you phrase the line as a question, probably beginning with the word "How...?", you might help the viewer be inquisitive: to go to the website and find out...

Wordfruit
Activity Score 1023
killazol1's picture

i do not like it. the reason is that the image is trying to much to deliver the message. also i'm not sure about the art direction. it's a little bit akward.

killazol1
Activity Score 354
edged's picture

I thought it was produced in Korea. Not in Malaysia.

edged
Activity Score 27
Art Director
ScratchdCanvas's picture

Like the above comment, maybe copy needs to change to "teach him to to control his appetite "

ScratchdCanvas
Activity Score 30
Graphic Designer at Designer/Art Director
mr.x's picture

Whats up with the shadows..

mr.x
Activity Score 998
Forsbergs Skola
Alexis-Chellito's picture

Let him know? How? What are you saying?

Alexis-Chellito
Activity Score 111
Copywriter
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