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flooz's picture
flooz
Activity Score 8

on the rail again

novtam's picture
novtam
Activity Score 4

Cool series, great conception, nice layout.

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thirty6chambers
Activity Score 1464

Is that guy in front wearing a confederate flag bandana?

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butwhatdoiknow
Activity Score 36

i bet you he ain't wearin no union flag on top of 'is big 'ol heayd
simple, not that direct
but me likey..

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monicamexico
Activity Score 830

The tag is weak - write it in a stronger, more clever way. The first one in the series doesn't make sense, since that guy would be walking if not for the bus.

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adrianapr
Activity Score 1254

you mean the train.
but agree, the guy would be walking anyway, so doesn't make sense at all.

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adrianapr
Activity Score 1254

the hitchhiker was veeeery weak and literal, but this is much better.
the line sucks, but the idea is good.

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rocketman
Activity Score 385

hmmm, i actually liked the line, especially the "forget the road" part, which is what a train gives u.
"the road" describes a very distinct experience for each one of these characters, even for the hitchhiker, and it's the idea of leaving that experience behind what makes the ad work.
could it be stronger? maybe yes, but i still got the message and smiled.
however, i agree with you that the hitchhiker is the weak one here.
cómo lo escribirías tú, mónica? saludos.

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sonar vaibhav
Activity Score 12

Sollid

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tigor
Activity Score 48

Lucu.

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Mr.Top
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