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TheVinchiFish's picture
Activity Score 86

Can do more on copy???
Pity pity!!!

cp's picture
Activity Score 354

At quick glance this looks like an anti-dandruff ad.
Even then, I think the guy needs Head & Shoulders.

s2z's picture
Activity Score 10

true. I thought so too.. bad copy..

wgeddes's picture
Activity Score 298

that's the whole point of this ad! you're supposed to think its a dandruff ad and think to yourself "wait a minute, there's MORE in the after photo!" then you realize it's not for dandruff shampoo, but a product that makes clothes blacker.

Chris's picture
Activity Score 1935


wgeddes's picture
Activity Score 298

haha that's funny... flips the whole thing around. i like.

muji's picture
Activity Score 66

bad campaign, bad photo, student work...

B128's picture
Activity Score 392

It would be more helpful if we say what we'd have done or how to improve the ads instead of giving a blanket condemnation.
This site offers a good opportunity for all of us to be better. Constructive criticism would really help.

esotericusername's picture
Activity Score 313

some things can't be helped.

tiny_wordz's picture
Activity Score 325

not new, been done a kazillion times. n watz creative bout this ad? it's just a see-you-see-us ad. it's looks like wat a client wuld force u to do.

Joker's picture
Activity Score 85

The black shirt on the left looks pretty black to me...if they are the same colour..the guy has dandruff and thats all...

Jarne von Wolfsburg's picture
Jarne von Wolfsburg
Activity Score 264

smart & clever mechanic

tiborplus's picture
Activity Score 53

i like the idea (mechanics), but the realisation could be much better. Also the left shirt is to close to the other one.

DarkSide's picture
Activity Score 1066

good idea (not very new I must say) but the ad leaves a bad impression after all...somethings wrong's picture
Activity Score 25

The after shot has more white dots than the before shot...surely these images should be switched or am I misinterpreting this ad?