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Braveheart's picture
Activity Score 112

Not with copy, you don't.

pretty good's picture
pretty good
Activity Score 364

Yeah the copy makes absolutely no sense.

Disco Munky's picture
Disco Munky
Activity Score 3890

It makes enough sense to be wrong.

And where is the product?

The iPod touch is a pretty sexy bit of kit. Stick it on the poster if you want people to not call you names and throw poop at you.

Doin' it for the points

benjaminbrown's picture
Activity Score 439

And be bothered to cut the middle of the CD out!

What are these anyway? They're not real Apple ads are they?

TrainRunner's picture
Activity Score 225

every aspect of everything needs work.

EGGO's picture
Activity Score 354

It MUST be a student. Look at the middle of the CD (along with everything else that is wrong with this).

You have to hate advertising in order to truly love it.

bknowlden's picture
Activity Score 3647

Ivan, why is this here?

Disco Munky's picture
Disco Munky
Activity Score 3890

good question.

Why is this here?

Don't mean to be super negative, but these are at best, rough ideas with basic visuals.

Doin' it for the points

ivan's picture

Sorry, if you don't think they belong. I'm always trying to be selective.

Pogi5's picture
Activity Score 253

This is horrible. Nothing is working, the visual sucks and whoever set the type needs to take some refresher typography courses.

Vicomte's picture
Activity Score 287

Old school and too bad

nice gaijin's picture
nice gaijin
Activity Score 815

I understand it might be a slow day, but please don't dredge up lame student work from the exhibition forum... The overall look and feel of this ad is a cleveland steamer on my chest compared to real Apple ads. The copy is bad, the visual is weak and boxes in the clausterphobic tag in the bottom right corner. The guy didn't even bother cleaning up the center of the CD! I held my tongue when this was in exhibition, but this kind of slipshod work is unacceptable in the archive.

sumbody's picture
Activity Score 134

terrible art

teenie's picture
Activity Score 1894

Blech. Who's "I" anyway?

cheza's picture
Activity Score 100

Thing. (a.k.a. the hand, lol)

dangerdude's picture
Activity Score 58

i believe this was way back then, referring to the 2nd gen iPods which had touchy wheels.
the middle of the CD is embarrassing

nice gaijin's picture
nice gaijin
Activity Score 815
krautland's picture
Activity Score 3216

holy shit, this is bad.
keep your dayjob, kiddo.

j4son's picture
Activity Score 266

should've been an april fools joke..

Not even worth commenting on,seriously.

Rog's picture
Activity Score 6080

What happens in between Award School...and that first job.
Hang in there, bro!

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

BrownSugar's picture
Activity Score 104

lol@ award school

jsptrck404's picture
Activity Score 437

no. bad dog.

| think small |

BogusTrumper's picture
Activity Score 9

Unbelievable lame.

天边的白鹭's picture
Activity Score 80

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kant's picture
Activity Score 130


notcaslon's picture
Activity Score 18

god i love de old east European translator... its so EurovisioN.

Guest's picture

oooo... oh my oh my... i like the idea but the excecution and photoshoping is letting this one down! big time... copy also needs work... sho... good idea though