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BASHAR's picture

Sorry, not amazing, better luck next time.

BASHAR
FAHAD's picture

Bashar, i didn't see your name at any work over here or you are only Concept Critic?!

FAHAD
Activity Score 85
Art Director
mikelite's picture

ouch, someone's pissy. seriously dude, there's a thousand opinions out there, don't let it get to you. If you think your turd is gold, then love it like a baby.

mikelite
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bandar's picture

i think its good... really emotional... NEW .... i loved it
great job fahad ....

bandar
Activity Score 26
Art Director
BASHAR's picture

Hey, nothing personal, but I cant say "wow" to the concept. Putting the yellow sign under the blue one can actually mean "keep the place clean and help us pick it up later" especially to people who may can't read English if its in the UAE, or to kids playing around they might feel curious to open the trash can and see what’s inside, the illustration used is simply confusing if you chose to put it for real in the restaurant.
On the left side it’s just a normal sign nothing creative about it.
I'd love to donate but without feeling guilty each time I eat outside.

BASHAR
FAHAD's picture

The message here is not to donate food but it's to REMIND the audience how many millions ding starving and i thing there is nothing to get confused about.

FAHAD
Activity Score 85
Art Director
Dotnl's picture

I'm sorry but i don't like it as well. I know many people are pore... this ad tries to ask a donation and that's not clear. Need i donate trash? Not so smart, not so good.

Dotnl
Guest's picture

very ordinary

Guest
Guest's picture

i think it's not outstanding, but it's ok... for me the concept is clear, the message goes straight to the point without any confussions... simple and direct, so it works

i just hate reading people around here who just crticize the work with a simple "i don't like it".. come one, it's not about "likings", it's about ideas, messages and efectivity... maybe you won't like something, but if it works and the message goes straight to the point, then it's good.

it's easy to talk but so hard to make good things, huh?

Guest
Guest's picture

You should put this ad in that trashbin :-)

Guest
Zeid's picture

Interesting twist on the typical 'trash graphic image' Fahad.

I don't know how effective it will be in such a small size and position. Maybe it should be on a larger sign near the trashbin to make it more prominent.

Zeid
Hero's picture

I think the problem is that we have all actually witnessed homeless people eating out of dumpsters. So telling us about it on a sign doesn't really spark any emotion.

Hero
Zulu's picture

This is almost good idea.

Not embarrasing, but probably not worth sending in for ad-guy opinion.

Zulu
Activity Score 84
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Lee Clow's picture

Great piece of work.

Lee Clow
FAHAD's picture

are you lee Clow " LEE CLOW "??

FAHAD
Activity Score 85
Art Director
Guest's picture

i dont knon.i want to know who make it?

Guest
FAHAD's picture

it's me

FAHAD
Activity Score 85
Art Director
Guest's picture

For all your critizers: A critic is only usefull if you can offer a better idea!!! if not, shut up

Guest
ivan's picture

A critique doesn't have to offer a solution.

ivan
Creative Director at Ads of the World
whitespace's picture

Will you guys hate me if I said I like it?

whitespace
Activity Score 1953
Creative Director
Guest's picture

Your graphic is fine but it doesn't give any indication of what to do next. Donate your uneaten food to -? Go ahead and garbage dive this bin..? If the idea is to convey a universal viewpoint of waste, then it works. But I doubt the average mall patron will have the time or interest to pay attention to this concept as delivered by the graphic alone.

Guest
penwirk's picture

I think its a decent idea, at least its original. And i think if people can critic, then they can do even better work.. so pls show what you have done before critising other pples work.

penwirk
itsme.'s picture

i think the idea is "ok"
but the placement is a little "off". I think it's should have been more prominant and visible.

itsme.
Ainadaliel's picture

I agree.

I won't really see it clearly unless I bend over to read the copy.

Which would make ME look like the person who's rummaging through the trash for food, LOL!

Ainadaliel
Activity Score 271
Copywriter
Guest's picture

Much ado about nothing

Guest
g2coo's picture

A powerful message but doesn't make any sense putting it on a trash bin. What do you expect the person to do ....donate the leftover food? Or go back to the table and finish the leftovers???

g2coo
saman's picture

It` s not just about the food you are eating at the right time it`s about donation in
every way that it is possible.

saman
Activity Score 50
Creative Director
Wags's picture

Better leave some left overs when you throw your lunch in the trash so the homeless can eat something too.

Wags
Activity Score 2
Art Director
g2cool's picture

??????

g2cool
Activity Score 42
Creative Director
saman's picture

I think it`s a very effective ambient, and that`s great.

saman
Activity Score 50
Creative Director
Trip's picture

Why do you Arab people copy work exactly as it is and then consider yourself Creative????????

Trip
Activity Score 18
Creative Director
Guest's picture

pam ydy pobl yn dweud pethau drwg, mae pobl yn treid!!!!Welsh...

Guest
Guest's picture

Trip! What you said made you look really ridiculous!
You are probably too uncivilized to post this meaningless comment over here..

Guest
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