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Lineup

Campaign
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Published/Aired: 
May 2008

Description

Ambient advertisement created by Humber College, Canada for Clue, within the category: Gaming.

Caption

Clue. The game of murder mystery. Everyone's a suspect.

Advertising School: Humber College, Toronto, Canada
Art Directors / Copywriters: Jenny Luong, Jared Friedberg
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RubixCube's picture

this is way better than the other ones!

Love the Line up concept.

RubixCube
Activity Score 8
Graphic Designer
ahmed ragheb's picture

lool I LIKE it too much !! bt poor COPY

ahmed ragheb
Activity Score 297
Graphic Designer
nicoruk's picture

i agree. Cool idea, poor copy!

nicoruk
Activity Score 107
AUGE
klaussnow's picture

this is pretty cool, i'd say brush up on the photoshop executions in the others, this one is passable, and you've got a winner.

klaussnow
Activity Score 1645
Art Director |

... its already been done...

Jet Propulsion Lab's picture

There's nothing wrong with either line.
I think this is could be a great ambient or outdoor poster in real life.
People will be snapping photos in front of it for sure...

Nice student book piece. Well done.

Jet Propulsion Lab
Activity Score 10679
Copywriter
chunkdude's picture

i should clarify, this is a campaign i did up in my book. im a student at humber college in toronto so yes theres been lots of obvious photoshopping, so please try to look past that at the idea and potential execution. thanks for the comments so far!

EDIT: to the first 2 posters, what about the copy makes it poor do you think?

chunkdude
Activity Score 31
Humber College - Advertising Copywriting |

- Jared

www.jaredfriedberg.com

ahmed ragheb's picture

Coz it's not CATCHY !!! i think .. it needs smthn with ( (wutever) UR SELF ) or smthn that apoint u.. !!

ahmed ragheb
Activity Score 297
Graphic Designer
kurtberengeiger's picture

And the copy in that comment really needs work... ;P
While the copy in the campaign is alright.

kurtberengeiger
Activity Score 7323
Copywriter
Steviec's picture

Good idea, but this one has been done for fare evasion ("Fare evasion is a crime") in Melbourne, Australia. I really like your soap idea though!

Steviec
Activity Score 126
Copywriter
adgoddess's picture

Congratulations for the whole campaign project!

adgoddess
Activity Score 369
Chad's picture

Great alternative/ambient piece

Chad
Activity Score 441
Art Director at Creative-Art director
Gabriellle's picture

I think the copy is good.
I'm always 'suspect' of those who comment that a piece of writing is poor, and yet are unable to suggest any ways in which to improve upon it.
The line is well crafted and completes the idea.

Gabriellle
Guest's picture

Excuse me. There ain't no free lunches in this country. And don't go spending your whole life commiserating that you got raw deals. You've got to say, 'I think that if I keep working at this and want it bad enough I can have it.'
I am from Arabia and know bad English, give please true I wrote the following sentence: "Cheap car alarms, practicality at its finest."

:o Thanks in advance. Read.

Guest
RubixCube's picture

this is way better than the other ones!

Love the Line up concept.

RubixCube
Activity Score 8
Graphic Designer
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