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bknowlden's picture

Smart, I like it.

bknowlden
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teenie's picture

Very nice idea.

But could they have used a font size bigger than 4 at the bottom of the presentation page? Copy is not a design element--it's communication!

teenie
Activity Score 1894
Copywriter
Disco Munky's picture

Nice and simple.

Copy needs to be bigger. I almost didn't bother reading.

Disco Munky
Activity Score 3890
Art Director |

Doin' it for the points

Fab Fab's picture

Smart.
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Imagine.

Fab Fab
Activity Score 26
Advertising Agency
pretty good's picture

sweet.

pretty good
Activity Score 364
copywriter
Jet Propulsion Lab's picture

Cute. Like it.
And if he loses the job as a swimming instructor and decides to become a plubmer, he can still keep the pouch! Ohmygod!!!

Jet Propulsion Lab
Activity Score 10679
Copywriter
Hiten86's picture

I like!!

Hiten86
Activity Score 72
Symbiosis Institute of Design |

Devil is in the details,
Lets keep it simple!

http://www.simplycircular.wordpress.com

Amit's picture

A lift of the Durex visiting card idea for sales people. It was a laminated card with gel-like substance that looked like sperm, floating inside. The idea won a pencil!

Amit
Activity Score 40
Copywriter
Jet Propulsion Lab's picture

Well in that case, it's really not a "lift" of an idea here, is it?
Lift means to directly copy (and/or steal) an already pulished or produced idea. This might have been "inspired" by that idea, if at all.
But a lift? I think not.

Jet Propulsion Lab
Activity Score 10679
Copywriter
wildbore's picture

.....yes...i agree wt jet p.lab. nice work.

wildbore
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niranjanhg's picture

Ya....... its ok good.........

niranjanhg
Activity Score 211

I am a student.

rahul awasthi's picture

gud team work.

rahul awasthi
Activity Score 6
sr. graphic designer
everartz's picture

ya thats ok :)
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horbhaikihaalhai's picture

nice

horbhaikihaalhai
Activity Score 20
PUBLICIS INDIA
gmint7's picture

:::J:::

nice.. so so nice

but whats with the layout???

gmint7
Activity Score 2675
Art Director at ad grad @ S Francisco |

:::J:::

pranjalbordoloi's picture

Thanks for the comments guys. A lotta people have expressed concern over the layout (including the font size of the text). This, actually, is the shot of an illustration board (is why it probably looks a bit weird on screen).

pranjalbordoloi
Activity Score 37
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Pranjal

Nevermind's picture

nice idea!!

Nevermind
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