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lagoon

the sinfull club

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Modal Writer
Activity Score 333

like the concept, but the line is lacking, it's just a see-say. visuals are cool, well done, but something about the all red is throwing me off, maybe a color scheme instead of the blood red out? ehh, anyways i'm just a writer, so i'd be more worried about the line, it's just a statement of the concept, so keep it straight but make it less obvious, make the reader's mind work a bit.

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