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Kamasutra

your comments and suggestions inspired me to be a bit arty. hope this works better.

Stigset's picture
Stigset
Activity Score 1454

This one is nice, I like it, but I think you need to work a bit more on the copy (visually I mean) and packshot positionning, because now it mingles a bit to much with the visual (you should seperate them more), and the font is a bit to thin and small.

TotalChaos's picture
TotalChaos
Activity Score 15

A different take on the good ol' position idea. Really like it. Relook at the font though!

truecopy's picture
truecopy
Activity Score 399

Nice work but do sumthin about the headline, hate to say it but reminds me of Microsoft too much - "Where do u want to go today?"

"Sex sells. Truth even better." - A friend

forpointsize's picture
forpointsize
Activity Score 65

good idea, bad artdirection

esilver's picture
esilver
Activity Score 18

Nice try~! It is really interesting for me to explain Kamasutra like this.
But, is there any more funny copy?

Minimum's picture
Minimum
Activity Score 1430

I should use a diffrent kind of arrow. I like the idea, its a diffrent view upon the positions...but I would choose a diffrent arrow.
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...and let the poets cry themselves to sleep. And all their tearfull words would turn back into steam

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...and let the poets cry themselves to sleep. And all their tearfull words would turn back into steam

ivan's picture
ivan

So why arrows?

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deadline-walking
Activity Score 79

the best way to convey kamasutra positions in a market like India (you can't even use illustrations suggesting sexual acts)

ivan's picture
ivan

Interesting to see India transforming from a sexually open past (Kamasutra, the temples, etc.) towards an extreme conservative present.

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TRICKY
Activity Score 3794

richard gere kissed an indians tv star now indians wants him dead .....mmmmm i wonder

The man who stops advertising to save money is like the man who stops the clock to save time

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jojo2001s
Activity Score 12

best idea!

Eugens's picture
Eugens
Activity Score 2624

good idea, good art-directing. do the copy somewhere along these lines: "Whichever way you want it"

jian's picture
jian
Activity Score 45

Really nice execution. I've seen the idea before in a car mag. They used bucket seats instead.

deadline-walking's picture
deadline-walking
Activity Score 79

Ivan,
Unfortunately that's what has been happening in India. Even advertising has a censor entity to convince.

deadline-walking's picture
deadline-walking
Activity Score 79

A BIG thanks to all you people out there for your comments and suggestions. So should i conside this piece for my books? please reply.

Minimum's picture
Minimum
Activity Score 1430

well its good. But I'm not sure if it's bookworthy with arrows. But I would place it as a concept or sketch
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...and let the poets cry themselves to sleep. And all their tearfull words would turn back into steam

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...and let the poets cry themselves to sleep. And all their tearfull words would turn back into steam

amit parekh's picture
amit parekh
Activity Score 283

nice

amit parekh's picture
amit parekh
Activity Score 283

goooooooooooooood

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8 WAVES
Activity Score 33

ooooooooohhhooo good one:)

Aref's picture
Aref
Activity Score 152

I like the idea but the Art direction is bad,

Chris's picture
Chris
Activity Score 1935

agreed, art director needs a little input

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