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GLUT. IDEAS BOUTIQUE

This is the first self-Promotional print of GLUT, an ideas boutique in Buenos Aires, Argentina.
Which belief is that every thing can and must have an idea behind.

LudwigVan's picture
LudwigVan
Activity Score 176

Puede ser el institucional de cualquier empresa eso, no me dice nada.

HappyHour's picture
HappyHour
Activity Score 2381

Needs a headline to invoke interest. No chance I'm even beginning to read all that copy without it.

See what I mean here:
http://adsoftheworld.com/media/print/national_cancer_society_malaysia_...

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JCSaiKrishna
Activity Score 725

Divide the copy into more paragraphs to make it more readable.

http://twitter.com/JCSaiKrishna
I'm excited to know my mistakes!

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